Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
There are many social, environmental, political issues we, as common people, need to pay our attention to. A public speaker or a reformer helps the dormant or uneducated public manifest the problems that are imminent/existing. But many a times an activist also is unaware of the dark deeds of powerful people, false scams, multinational coorporations, strong political entities etc.
Scandals can be defined in many ways. Some can be considered as purely monetary as its aim, some as cupidity for social power or for personal gains. I agree with the author that scandals can focus our attention on the problems which are necessary.
Mainly scandals are, looting the common people by duping them. Political entities may or may not be involved. The charlatans entice the common people by giving them ludicrous offers, which they make them think,will benefit them. And majority of common people being easily manipulated by easy money are trapped in these scams. These scams are mainly aimed at swindling the peasants. The worst part is that the victims doesn’t even realise they are being thugged. They are so much captivated by these enticing schemes, they don’t even check the authenticity of those people. And often, these people are accompanied by the political entities.
All this is happening in so dark that no one even realises that someone is up to something bad. And no activist or reformer can throw light on this. The only way these people can be exposed is to perform a sting operation or an undercover investigation. When these scams are exposed in public, the common people then come to know about what is actually happening and they need to focus on these problems first hand.
For example, a chemical company who instead of refining its waste, which costs a lot of money, dumps it in the river which in turn kills the village dwellers consuming that water. To cover up this blame the company declares that people died because of an endemic spread in that village and they bribe some of the officers to corroborate this claim. When this is exposed as a scandal, the real deed of the company is effused in front of the general public. This would focus the general attention on the problem created by the chemical company on environment, which by a reformer could have been easily supressed by the power of the company.
Another example being, the 2G scam in India. This scandal exposed the ruling party being involved in this scam which was ruling for more than fifteen years. There were many accusations by political activists but they were suppressed by the political prowess of the ruling party. Only a full exposure can bring light to the scam. And it did, and as a result, they lost the next general election.
Hence it is true that these scandals bring forth the dark deeds of these charlatans, hence focusing the attention of general public on what is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2421.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93075356415 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60293897203 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49083503055 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3278476145 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4642857143 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5357142857 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 20.0 5.13820224719 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215620367239 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537723243087 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594607771718 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100999624621 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315145203816 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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