Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Nowadays more and more scandals are being uncovered due to widespread social media. But do these revelations help in any way is the question we ponder on. Scandals can be stated useful in many ways, as they often reveal hidden problems with the system in place, they pose a large question mark on the ethics and integrity of an organization(s) or parties involved in the scandal.
Taking the example of Wells Fargo, which was caught creating over a million fake accounts and stealing money. Wells Fargo, more than a century old bank lost its long standing reputation, its stock took a dip and stagnated while other banks prospered, the CEO and a number of other high profile individuals were fired for this. Further investigations revealed that the main goal of managers in the bank was to increase sales numbers regardless of the methods used in doing so. This particular makes us think about the importance of integrity in organizations. The other problem it points to is that it is the leadership that is responsible for imparting values which discourage this behavior and having integrity promoting systems is not enough.
Another example which questions our values as a society is the latest sex scandal discovered in 2019 in Madhya Pradesh, India. The scandal involved a leader of an NGO who also ran a prostitution racket behind the dorrs and trapped highly influential people, even the head of state, the chief minister. The perpetrator would invite such individuals and offer them errotic services and afterwards blackmail them into approving big government projects for the NGO and extort money out of them. In this case both the perpetrator and the victims are breaking the law and causing huge harm to the society.
Both the above examples reveal major flaws in the system and sparked debates all across countries on how to handle such situations and prevent them from happening again. These type of illicit activities take place at various levels and degrees, revelation of a few of them inculcates a movement countering these. Big leaders are too careful for their own good to touch such topics. therefore they are mostly addressed in informal ways by the media.
Revelation of scandals has now motivated whistle blower programs. Equal punishment for perpetrators at all levels. Preventions of sexual harrasment programs and tranings have started to happen. When they are hidden high officials get away with wrong doings and at some small level lower officials are punished.
Eventhough I agree with the usefulness of scandals being revealed, but it does permanently affect the innocent people attatched to the organizations doing it in a bad way, permanent damage to careers, lessened future opportunities, etc... The solution to such activities is inculcating a value system which deters their occurrence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an organization' or simply 'organizations'?
Suggestion: an organization; organizations
...ion mark on the ethics and integrity of an organizations or parties involved in the scandal. T...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...argo, more than a century old bank lost its long standing reputation, its stock too...
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Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...or their own good to touch such topics. therefore they are mostly addressed in informal w...
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Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...or their own good to touch such topics. therefore they are mostly addressed in informal w...
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Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...attatched to the organizations doing it in a bad way, permanent damage to careers, lessened ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13882863341 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75531108394 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626898047722 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3757501645 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.681818182 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9545454545 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141840807547 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370261421246 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416824503514 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733767601658 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446198102359 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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