So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, Adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts.
Safety of the people is a major concern in driving and seat belts are important factors that contribute to the it. While adults, when made aware of the dangers involved in not wearing a seatbelt would be more likely to wear seatbelts than underaged ones, this in no way can prove that all of them will use seatbelts and thus be safe during a drive. We, therefore, need to consider a combination of these two methods of raising awareness and imposing legal binds to get the best safety possible.
First of all, being aware of a danger and doing everything that can protect you from that danger are not the same. We can do everything to make every adult in the world know about the dangers of not driving without a seatbelt and even then we cannot say for sure no accidents involving adults not wearing seatbelts will occur. Even as sufficiently knowledgeable and warned of the consequences, an adult can easily forget about wearing a seatbelt especially if he's in a hurry or is engrossed in something else. Giving way to their unwarranted bravura, some adults might think that they can make the journey without using seatbelts and some might think that as they are so proficient at driving, they don't need the aid of seatbelts. All of this can come as a factor contributing to accidents involving drivers not wearing seatbelts even when they are adequately aware of the dangers.
Secondly, the idea of removing the legal bind is not conducive to the fact of becoming more aware. In fact, some people become more aware of the rules and regulations once they have been punished for breaking them once. This is specially important for teenagers and young people in general who are aware of the rules but not considerate enough to follow them. These legal bindings keeps people on their toes when driving a car as they know that they will be legally charged once they are found without seatbelts. Also, money is a big factor when raising conscience of about anything. If we charge money everytime a person is caught not wearing seatbelts, they are more likely to become much aware of it in the future because no one in the world wants to lose money even if they have an insane amount of it. Removing the legal bind, therefore, precludes thse important mediums of raising conscience among people about the importance of wearing seatbelts.
Finally, the idea about removing the legal bind is not without complete merit. As people are made more aware of the dangers through generally noticeable mediums such as films, advertisements, documentaries, local media etc, even when there is no legal bind, they are likely to follow the rules. In fact, once something people like is made formal, a lot of people become apathetic to doing it. For instance, a short story about a girl and her favorite bird is likeable and everyone loves reading it until the point when it is inserted in a textbook. Once students know that they have to read it to know what is in there and to understand it completely because it is likely to appear in their exam, they become uninterested in it. Likewise, removing the legal bind and making the reason more compelling in other ways can decrease accidents involving people not wearing seatbelts to a great extent.
In conclusion, although removing the legal bind once people are made sufficiently aware of the dangers of not wearing seatbelts can have a positive effect, in the long run, legal bind is that very factor which makes raising conciousness important. Therefore, we need to make sure that the legal bind is strictly reinforced while at the same time making the people aware of the dangers because only the combination of these two can make the roads and the drives more safe and pleasant for everyone..
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...ives more safe and pleasant for everyone..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3096.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 648.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55056880608 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413580246914 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 998.1 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9786489076 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.608695652 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1739130435 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95652173913 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223829936791 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706959964806 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503436522217 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138016685368 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274942808728 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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