Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
god created the rich biodiversity for the sustainability of humans and animals. A proper ecological balance will be maintained if humans or natural calamities don’t disturb the ecological cycle. Even though extinction is evident through them, it could be the need of the hour to protect them if we want to lead a better life. So, a society should take efforts to not only save endangered species caused as a result of nature or human intervention but also to put a full stop to their potential extinction.
Nowadays, we witness the extinction of species to a greater extent. there are a myriad reason supporting the view. first, with the advancement in the field of science and technology, there is a huge increase in the release of chloro-Fluro carbons from fridge and air conditioners that has led to the formation of holes in the ozone layer. With this depletion, glaciers are melting which eventually affects the climatic conditions of the earth. Ice melts resulting in the flooding of rivers and seas ultimately resulting in the loss of lives. Secondly, the usage of mobile phones has a drastic effect on the migratory birds. The radiations and signals from the phone cause the birds to get confused with the directions of flight and hence they land up in a different region owing to the death of large number of birds. Thirdly, hunters and poachers hunt animals for their meat, skin and trunk adding to the overall extinction of species.
Furthermore, according to Darwin’s theory of existence, stronger animals hunt the weaker ones and hence results in the survival of the fittest. With the advent of time, this could result in the weaker animals getting predated and their number becoming meagre. Moreover, due to natural calamities like flood and earthquake, the number of animals surviving is getting reduced. For instance, the recent fire outbreak in the forests of amazon witnessed the destruction of the flora and fauna. Nobody could compensate for such a heavy loss.
The examples cited above give a clear indication of the ill effects caused by man and nature. if necessary precautions are not taken, then man will witness a flaw in the ecological balance in turn leading to his own destruction. governments are taking the necessary precaution to save such animals from extinction. For example, tigers which is the national animal of India has become extinct due to the hunting of tigers for their skin. but government started the “save tiger, save India” campaign to save them by imposing huge fines to the people found killing them.
Thus, in conclusion, it can be reiterated that for a peaceful living in this world, it becomes the sole responsibility of an individual to cater to the needs of the nature. it is high time that humans wake up and take measures to preserve the god given gift. Instead of mandating the process of abiding by the laws, each person must strive for the benefit of mankind. A good balance in nature alone could lead to the successful living in this universe. man must take the first step towards is growth and progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2609.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01730769231 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72879058869 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3410608287 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6296296296 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2592592593 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.74074074074 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165033985145 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384514085649 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837483563317 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901221185989 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961054595166 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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