Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Recently, a prevalent statement is often being seemed is that promise leaders are essential to yield to public. this is because following public opinions sometimes makes the country more peaceful. Opponents, however, argue that the public should carry out their own ideas because the public may not have a prospective sight. From a personal view, both are reasonable. The attitude of government should depend on topics such as economic, political, education. The details are discussed below.
To begin with, government is crucial to make no compromise about economic decisions. specifically, there is no doubt that political leaders are mostly working well in the economy. there is no doubt that they could predict more than public and make more effective decisions. At the same time, opinions from the public may control by others. In this case, public opinion would make a terrible effect of government. there is equally possible that the public is composed of normal people who have not recieved formal education of the economy and make decisions follow their heart. making compromise to such opinions is dangerous for a government.
Moreover, the leaders are significant to hold their own political opinions. No one could be more familiar with his own country than a political leader, or called president. He knows making friends with which the country could bring more benefits and fighting with which country could protect his country's treasure with abundant information achieved from the whole government. The public could hardly get close to comprehensive information. Let alone make a fair choice about political problems. Hence, leaders should focus more on their own view when meeting political difficulties.
Despite leaders could work well with their own idea in some cases, they still need to follow the public opinion about education. The citizens are often the people who most acquainted with education. this is because largely of them or their kids' have faced problems or experiencing unfair now. they could provide a specific view about education or a better method to mitigate problems. depending on a study from the University of Tokyo, about 67-percent effective refinement are provided by students and their parents. In this condition, listening public opinion more could promise a sanguine outcome.
To sum up, political leaders are essential to insist their own opinions in economic and politic or other conditions which need a lot of resources to achieve a more comprehensive apprehension. At the same time, considering public opinion is crucial when discussing education and other topics which public involved. Therefore, both would effective in certain cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, no doubt, such as, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38625592417 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71862506819 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490521327014 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1924420502 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1785714286 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32142857143 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102719656442 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311287816837 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412526630531 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671624432168 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253706359765 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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