Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The dispute that whether corporations should undertake the social responsibility or focus on profits provided legally is highly controversial in the contemporary world. From my perspective, such two goals are not adversarial. Instead, appropriate methods of seeking profits by companies are indeed beneficial to the well-being of the societies and environments.
The corporations takes advantages of the social resources. Granted that such resources is exploited efficiently only after being accrued, such concentration still undermines the social equity. Thus, apart from making profits and undertaking legal responsibility, corporations are obliged to take social responsibility morally. For example, the factories based on woods are obliged to rejuvenate the forest ecosystem, and those which pollute the waters should help fishermen make their living.
Some may argue that in a highly competitive market, considering social responsibility is idealistic for a corporation striving for a living. If a corporation spare resources on taking social responsibility, it is more challenging for the corporation to keep pace with its competitors. hence, its shareholders and owners are most likely reluctant to consider the well-being of others, worrying their corporations will be left behind, or even suffer bankruptcy. such refute is sound superficially, however, it fails to realize the well-being of the society and the environment is not an impediment to its success. Regardless of the potential positive profile in the public, which will encourage prosperity, the well-being of society and environment is beneficial for the corporation's long-term development. however, in order not to fall into such pit of base competitions, affirmative legislation is required.
As a matter of fact, under most circumstances, pursuing profits in a proper way generally enhances the well-being of society. In a healthy market, corporations compete in a way that generally accelerates the development of this field. new participants will bring new techniques and lower the costs as well as prices. In the end, the consumers benefit from such competitions since they have access to goods with both high quality and low prices. In such practice, a win-win situation is achieved.
however, the assertion that the corporations only need to consider the well-being of the place where they reside is incomplete. Entrepreneurs are likely to move their factories to other countries, which are usually developing ones. over here, entrepreneurs are inclined to exploit underprivileged workers to maximize their output and jeopardize the environment over there for short-term revenues. In short, we should not restrain the boundary of its responsibility.
In conclusion, the well-being of society and the environment is aligned with corporations' profits under appropriate situations. however, we shall not presuppose the corporations will take their responsibility actively, in facing a highly competitive world. hence, the relation between the two issues should be dealt scrupulously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in short, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2634.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84035476718 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41086410359 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521064301552 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5455574613 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.36 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243576168 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643471219121 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484023186354 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127428978974 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286943518542 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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