TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it may share absolute correctness to say, "rules apply equally to each and every one in the society." Nonetheless, for young people, there are a pile of addtional yet unnecessary rules to follow. these rule originate from seemingly the commonality of social cognition, but they indeed make young people shoulder surplus burden and restrictions.
From the most distant part of our memories, we have been inculcated the significance of study. it seems to be our inherent resposibility to devote ourselves to learning, mostly not for us, but for glory of parents or teachers. Here I have no intention to cast doubt on the benefit of learning. they are substantial for children's future, admittedly. however, it does not necessary mean that we should always give priority to grade oriented learning, especially for kids who have quantities of energy and motivation towards the outside world. however, in this day and age, a increasing competive atmosphere provides children no alternative but stifling curiosity and constraining children into repetive shoolwork. Gradually, it seems to be a common sense or a rule for children to be dedicated to grades and tests.
Moreover, besides restriction in studying, the young people are facing more criticism from the adults as well. The criticism includes various aspect, but the core clash stems from the generation gap. since the power of voice is not held in the emerging generation, some normal behaviors are considered as eccentric from the elderly people's standpoint. Plus, the older generation is trying to impose their values on young people. Perhaps these rules are not a restriction or a burden, but they neglect the development of society and swift in societal fibers. So, it is no wonder that the youth have the feeling of being confined and restricted.
Finally, the simplistic understanding of life aim restrict young people in the pursuit of money or status, with no consideration of whether they are fond of it. since the majority hold the view that only money and power represent success and despise those who do not achieve these, the young people have no chioce but to abide by the mainstream of the social values, which induce extra pressure on them.
As the aforementioned arguments state, young people today, despite the fact that they are living in a more relaxed society, are still confined and disturbed by the rules in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17346938776 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86543530583 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584183673469 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0147642633 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11412264503 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322768415095 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033349257363 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726036332657 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353013765803 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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