some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided the operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Organizations, in general, need to make a profit to continue their activity in the environments. But, since some issues such as global warming, taking care of the environment, using recyclable materials as raw materials and so on are trending, some companies adopt different approaches through their business. If we take a look at environmental concerns, for example, we find out how important it is for companies to have an eye on social responsibilities they have, as it makes their business sustainable. Producing merchants are not harmful to the environments tells this fact to the customers we think as you think, and we care about your worries. So, from my point of view, a company in the 21st century in most cases cannot states that I just want to make money without taking care any responsibility for society.
Companies used to have a different perspective to their business. They just wanted to make more and make more money. It could be easily figured out through management theories, all of them were concerning about optimizing the work procedures. Henry ford was one of the eminent entrepreneurs in the history. He established the myriad production perspective to produce more and more cars, in order to made more money. This perspective had been prevalent in most major companies in the world for decades, until in 1980’s that for the first time human resource management has been stated and completely changed the view.
From that time, more companies tried to care more about their employees and we can consider it as the first step to well-being of the societies and the environment, as their employees are members of the societies and they have a knock-on effect on the environments. The process has taken 30 years, and during that time it was the major outlook of companies. After that, some bigger issues appeared on the way of making money of companies. Right now, companies have to think about global warming, the material they use, how to treat with their employees and what they do for the society they are part of it. In my country, for instance, one of the major publishers named Ghalamchii has provided scholarships for thousands of indigent children who are talented to pursue their dreams at universities, but they cannot afford it. These kinds of scholarships are also, prevalent in western countries too. Some of them are very generous, even they give this money, in some cases around 35000$ annually, to migrant students, just to pursue their dreams.
However, in some third world countries, many corporations still do not care about anything but money, and, unfortunately, the law cannot tie and force them to act more responsibly. This situation usually exists in the countries suffer from lack of competitive environment. Or maybe, they have tons of raw materials, so they do not care about the environment and because, in my opinion, people in these countries live in lower standards, they do not know about concepts such as social responsibility and society well-being.
As a whole, in a wealthy and standard environment, such as most westerns countries, this is normal for companies to help the people in the society, actually this is an action to promote the market position of the brand and can make people also satisfied. Therefore, in my opinion, companies have to spread well-being in societies because in the long-term view it will be beneficial for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...onmental concerns, for example, we find out how important it is for companies to ha...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hrough management theories, all of them were concerning about optimizing the work procedures. H...
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Line 5, column 981, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35000'.
Suggestion: $35000
...y give this money, in some cases around 35000$ annually, to migrant students, just to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, third, well, for example, for instance, in general, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2851.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02821869489 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89163429875 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490299823633 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 879.3 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.896893649 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.956521739 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.652173913 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73913043478 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192263708575 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538690095058 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475116656601 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1165764076 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038141240236 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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