Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
Commonly people misunderstand the first goal of their jobs, that is not to make more money in favor of the society to which they work, but to gain reputation and multiply the number of customers interested in building a relationship with that society. As soon as possible they accomplish it, they increase the profit of their company. Corporations have the same responsibilities.
First and foremost, corporations need to promote the good quality of the companies they work for, especially when these companies are unknown. In order to make these societies last over the time, corporations have to try to rely on the customer’s loyalty. Members of the organizations have to work on need of people, trying to positively affect them by promoting attractive advertising or convenient promotions. Thus, corporations have to develop several faces of their job, including marketing and customer behavior. In the pursuit of their goal, social media have an influential impact because in a developed society it is the fastest and cheapest way to make people get information.
When corporations have increased the number of followers and customers, they can think about money
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 2235.4752809 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15062937956 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.063456111 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224743869484 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960876207163 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254230040546 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156112563009 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292978017577 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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