Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
As businesses has become global, many companies are operating in different countries. With prosperity in business and globalization, the idea of business has shifted from only making money in short term to making money for the long term by growing with the community in which it is operating. Thus it can create a positive impression as well as can remain profitable in the long run. So, although the main goal of business is to make as profit as much as possible, the corporations have a responsiblity toward the wellbeing of the society and environment, as it uses the resorces from it.
All the businesses established in the world uses the resources available in a community or country it is operating within, some of the products a business might produce or deal with may have a adverse effect on the society or environment. The product might be harmful but necessary to some extent, either for medical purpose or even for luxury. For example, we can state the British American Tobacoo company. It is a general consensus that the tobacoo products are harmful for human health as well the the raw matterials used to make those products result in cutting down trees to make paper for the ciggerates. Thus the BATB has taken a social wellfare program to compensate the the harm it is doing to the environment by planting more tree every year that is cut down to make its product. This a kind of payback to the society from the BATB to show its goodwill.
Again, no matter what type of service or product a corporation is providing, they are using the resource that belong to all. One might argue that the corporations are spending their money and own the resources they hare using. But that is not the case always. For exapmle a lot of water is used in the garments industry. After finishing the process the water is released in the wild which then get absorbe in the soil. If the chemicals, which are highly deleterious to the nature and human health are not removed before poring it in the nature it may result in adverse effect. Thus the garments industry which are operating in Bangladesh requires to have an ETP plant for preocessing the chemical water before releasing it in the open even though the cost of operating the ETP is very high. By this way their minimizing their affect on the environment and promotes its wellbeing.
Although, the corporations might feel moral obligations to participate in the social and environmental wellfare program , but the ultimate goal of doing business is making money to some corporations. One can say that, if they are abided by the laws enforced in a coountry, they do not owe anything more. and should use the oppotunity to make as more money as possible. In Bangladesh few companies were forced to shutdoown due to less profitibility due to maintaing the laws enforced to protect the environment due to cost. It might sound logical though, but if we look at the bigger picture, as a part of the community, to sustain the community and maintain its soundness the corporations should not ignore them.
While the purpose of doing business is to make profit, one cannot just ignore the importance of the community a business is operating in. Thus, a corporation should have some responsibility in maintaining the wellbeing of the society and environment while trying to remain profitable as much as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...the community in which it is operating. Thus it can create a positive impression as ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nity or country it is operating within, some of the products a business might produce or de...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ess might produce or deal with may have a adverse effect on the society or enviro...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
...itish American Tobacoo company. It is a general consensus that the tobacoo products are harmful f...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ts are harmful for human health as well the the raw matterials used to make those produ...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ts are harmful for human health as well the the raw matterials used to make those produ...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...trees to make paper for the ciggerates. Thus the BATB has taken a social wellfare pr...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...a social wellfare program to compensate the the harm it is doing to the environment by ...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...a social wellfare program to compensate the the harm it is doing to the environment by ...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ey hare using. But that is not the case always. For exapmle a lot of water is used in ...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'garments'' or 'garment's'?
Suggestion: garments'; garment's
...r exapmle a lot of water is used in the garments industry. After finishing the process t...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...water is used in the garments industry. After finishing the process the water is rele...
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Line 5, column 578, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nature it may result in adverse effect. Thus the garments industry which are operati...
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Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'garments'' or 'garment's'?
Suggestion: garments'; garment's
... may result in adverse effect. Thus the garments industry which are operating in Banglad...
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Line 5, column 827, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...igh. By this way their minimizing their affect on the environment and promotes its wellbe...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ocial and environmental wellfare program , but the ultimate goal of doing business...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...oountry, they do not owe anything more. and should use the oppotunity to make as mo...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e corporations should not ignore them. While the purpose of doing business is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in short, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2788.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 579.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81519861831 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78659096021 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449050086356 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 901.8 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6915383744 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.52 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.16 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216776048845 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549574343058 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493515553952 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124144974424 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313658662105 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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