Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There is no denying that people have different views regarding the responsibility of corporations, and the corporations themselves would like to make the most benefits possible. I personally tend to side with the belif that corporations should care about the environment and the people around them. One of my main reasons for that decision is the fact that only a given corporation truly knows what effect it is having on its surroundings more than anyone else outside, for example a factory that is built close to residential areas, it is aware of how much waste and pollution it produces and should work on protecting the surrounding people from such toxins, otherwise it should relocate.
It would also be wise to keep your neighbors happy, otherwise the people will start complaining, and complaints might rise to suing, and a risk of financial problems and unnecessary time consumption for the corporation and its workers. Showing the people that you care about them will set you off on the right foot, a good reputation might also evolve along a common respect.
The other opinion of people that believe that companies should just worry about operating within the law and focus on maximum profit, triggers a critical issue, exactly how good is the law in protecting the environment and society? maybe it is biased for the money greedy corporations. One thing is sure, is that no man-made law is perfect. It isn't holy, but in fact it may be full of holes and gaps and we tend to see that all the time with lawyers finding gaps in the law to achieve a certain target, even if that target is unethical.
Laws must be respected, but they also need to be reviewed and judged for its fairness and effectivness, nowadays most companies just try to focus on the fastest or the best way to achieve a huge profit without caring about anything else. In some cases, we have seen companies get busted for a huge scandal that they had been well hiding such as VW and how their cars weren't emitting the right amount of carbon dioxide that they claimed to have. The law was there to punish them, but it wasn't there to protect the people in the first place as the company's main focus was to manipulate with it rather than to care for the environment and people's health.
In conclusion, It is certainly important to have laws for corporations to work within its limits, however it would be more effective and better for corporations to have some responsibility to help the environment, and help balance things a bit, raising the corporations' conscience towards the people in order to avoid future problems and damage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...s should care about the environment and the people around them. One of my main reasons for that decisi...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Maybe
...protecting the environment and society? maybe it is biased for the money greedy corpo...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... is that no man-made law is perfect. It isnt holy, but in fact it may be full of hol...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...ll hiding such as VW and how their cars werent emitting the right amount of carbon dio...
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Line 7, column 487, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...he law was there to punish them, but it wasnt there to protect the people in the firs...
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Line 7, column 556, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ople in the first place as the companys main focus was to manipulate with it rather than t...
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Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
... help balance things a bit, raising the corporations conscience towards the people in order ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in some cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79203539823 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67702040502 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517699115044 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9409357431 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.615384615 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7692307692 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240056999777 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809617697688 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599477659405 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125604187908 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462746031166 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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