Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The government consists of a hierarchy of political leaders that have control over certain areas such as the legislative, judicial, and executive branches. There is information and data enclosed within the government that many of the public residents would like to know about in order to address the issues but some people think they should not have a right to the information. The public should have the right to be fully informed because they are involved in the government from paying taxes and voting on political leaders and new legislature. Information does exist within the government that could be a danger to the public if they were to know about it.
Every single person who either has a legal job or shops at the local grocery store pays taxes; federal income, state, social security, and sales. The tax money is essentially money that goes directly to the government and is spent in different areas such as the department of transportation, department of education, or even an emergency budget. Since the public is paying for these taxes and providing a source of income to the government, they should be fully informed about where the federal budget is being spent. For example, federal taxes should be spent on military personnel but sometimes it is being spent on other unimportant areas under the table and the public is not notified about it.
Not only should the public have access to governmental information because they pay taxes, but they also have the right to vote on any new legislature or political leader. For example, the general election for the presidential candidate is fast approaching and many are confused for who to vote for because each candidate is throwing out misleading information and the public does not know who to believe. The public should always be fully informed about any information regarding the prospective candidate in order for them to make a politically correct choice at the voting polls. As a suggestion, a website could be created that holds all of the information about each candidate in an easy and accessible manner.
The public population should be fully informed on any, and all, political information, but there are some touchy issues in areas that could cause more harm than good if the public were to know about it. It has always been said that there are things going on within the government that the president does not even know about in order to protect him. The military is full of top secret information because if this information were leaked it could lead to a national disaster. Sometimes in life it is simply easier to not know any information at all rather than know some but put people’s lives in danger.
In fully, residents who partake in legal activities such as paying taxes and taking a roll in voting should be fully informed on governmental information with the exception of top secret information that could jeopardize the safety of a country and its residents. It is always easier to be safe than sorry for previously committed actions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 643, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., a website could be created that holds all of the information about each candidate in an ...
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Line 5, column 721, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...idate in an easy and accessible manner. The public population should be fully in...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ly informed on governmental information with the exception of top secret information that could jeopa...
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Line 9, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sorry for previously committed actions.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212727272727 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.178181818182 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890909090909 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490909090909 0.0497285424764 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0309090909091 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132727272727 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0545454545455 0.0406280797675 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7188483247 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327272727273 0.030933414821 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00363636363636 0.0016655270985 218% => OK
Determiners: 0.116363636364 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254545454545 0.0249443105267 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163636363636 0.0148568991511 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3057.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 511.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98238747554 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344422700587 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225048923679 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176125244618 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13698630137 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7188483247 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418786692759 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.7338917391 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.3888888889 23.380412469 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1779859709 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.833333333 141.124799967 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3888888889 23.380412469 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.674092028746 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 50.8937812568 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.54929577465 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404801716822 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157064090686 0.123202303941 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.095958995814 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609401574754 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13699354277 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188021402872 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707627488006 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426784431114 0.385218514788 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0508675987389 0.0692045440612 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287573812551 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055750318626 0.0653680567796 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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