Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Leader plays the most significant role in a team. Especially, in case of leading a nation, political leaders are the ultimate game changers. According to the prompt, there is an ongoing debate concerning the fact that whether the political leaders should obey the will of the people or strict to the established principles. In my opinion, political leaders should shape their styles based on the contingency-- according to the need of the situation. I believe that political leaders should welcome both of the positions according to the need of the nation. I will illustrate my opinion with three specific examples.
First of all, every nation has some well-defined principles that have must be maintained to retain the existence of the nation. These principles are made for the general mass although people don't like them always. For example, people in Bangladesh have to bear an additional taxes every year who own personal cars. Many people find it burdensome and complain to the ministry of trade to compensate the tax. However, the prime minister of Bangladesh repudiated the claim and urged to pay the taxes in due time. It is worthy to mention that the revenue generated from the annual car tax is used to make the metro rail in Bangladesh, which is an expensive project. If the leader showed leniency here, the project will take longer. Consequently, it will suffer the people terribly. From the above example, it is apparent that political leaders need to strict to the principles rather than the will of the people for the benefit of the country.
Secondly, an effective leader needs to have some particular traits that the common people don't have. According to the trait theory of leadership, a leader needs to have seven basic traits including intelligence, honesty, desire, knowledge, extraversion and so on. Therefore, a leader can anticipate the impact of a decision which his/her followers can't predict. For example, many people in Bangladesh showed reluctance to take COVID-19 vaccine when it first arrived to Bangladesh. Although the government tried to ameliorate their fears and made the vaccination free, people did not come forward. However, after the second wave of COVID- 19 people can realize the impact and now willing to take the vaccine. If the government doesn't strict to its' principles to vaccinate its' people, the death rate in Bangladesh will be worsened. From this illustration, it is discerning that a leader who is committed this motives can lead the nation positively.
Nonetheless, an effective leader must hear his followers' needs. Else, it will raise chaos and turbulence in the nation. For example, people in Bangladesh during 2015-2016 felt the importance of 4G in Bangladesh. Many freelancers requested the P.M. to launch 4G service in Bangladesh for effective e-commerce. After investigation and analysis, the government of Bangladesh finally launched the 4G service and now focusing to initiate 5G network in Bangladesh. Clearly, Bangladesh Government paves the way of smooth online business by enabling these services. From this case example, it is evident that the political leaders should validate the claims if the public and should act upon the investigation outcome.
To conclude, an effective leader is an asset to the nation. He should care for the laws, regulations and principles to run the nation. At the same time, he needs to prioritize the opinion of the lay people to sustain the development of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...de for the general mass although people dont like them always. For example, people i...
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...ral mass although people dont like them always. For example, people in Bangladesh have...
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Suggestion: tax; taxis
...n Bangladesh have to bear an additional taxes every year who own personal cars. Many ...
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Suggestion: don't
...articular traits that the common people dont have. According to the trait theory of ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t of a decision which his/her followers cant predict. For example, many people in Ba...
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2914.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 564.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84131523771 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 907.2 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3037798398 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.303030303 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274755271184 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739338658639 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590181465107 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16301403946 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026914352223 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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