Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Leadership is not about the position one occupies or the level he or she has attain rather, it is the capability or ability to influence a group of people been led in order to attain their desired goals. An effective leader must possess a standard principles and norms that guide him in leading his people rightly. Some people argues that the ability for a leader to remain focused and committed to a specific norms while leading others describe him as an “Effective leader” while others gainsay that an “Effective leader” must succumb to general opinion and leave behind principles just to please its followers. I mostly agree with the suggestion that an effective leader must be able to have a certain principles and objectives guiding him, but I do concede that yielding to public opinions would surely create an atmosphere for equity.
To begin with, an effective leader should not be led by its followers rather; he should lead his members by following a standard norm that will guide them in attaining their desired goals. For instance, when a leader pays attention to the public, there will be division since everyone has their own opinion to give and this will in turn lead to chaos when the leader his unable to please each of its members. In addition, the head will lose his cap since he has no say and will not be respected by his members. A society where there is no law, there is definitely no offence and the public are not to be blamed.
Further, following a particular principle help a particular group of people to behave and act rightly, and to be responsible in the society because how one present his or her self in public tells a lot about the background where the person is comes from. For instance, a man who pregnant a woman without paying her pride prize will be forced to marry her and that will serve as a great lesson to other man. In addition, people will tend to be responsible and that will promote a good name for the head and its members as well.
On the contrary, a leader allowing its members to detect for him on how to lead them will bring about flexibility and create no room for judgment since there will be total freedom of speech and expression without fear being persecuted. For instance, ladies would be able to wear bra and pant to the church without being reprimand. In addition, a Yoruba man would be very comfortable to marry an Igbo lady without being criticized.
In conclusion, there is need for a leader to set a solid foundation when leader its members so as to promote respect, orderliness, and cooperation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'attained'.
Suggestion: attained
...one occupies or the level he or she has attain rather, it is the capability or ability...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'norm'?
Suggestion: norm
...ain focused and committed to a specific norms while leading others describe him as an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an Igbo lady without being criticized. In conclusion, there is need for a leade...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...olid foundation when leader its members so as to promote respect, orderliness, and coope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67252747253 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56997234995 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463736263736 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2758250299 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.733333333 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321276401762 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120219332178 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963654030562 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179328691624 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124922554135 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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