Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Nowadays ‘Scientific discoveries’ is a buzzword in present world though it has some merits and demerits to understand .The author states that a group believes today’s science ease our understanding about the things in the universe, others by contrast believe this very science make us more confounded than ever to realize what is happening around the world. I tend to moderately agree with both of this prompts and I have some hypothetical analysis that could clarify my position with these arguments.
In some cases and is some fields, the scientific innovation make us more comfortable to understand better what actually is happing around us every day. Take the invention of ‘Internet’ for instance. It provides us thousands of information in a second that previously impossible to glean in years. What is happing other side of the word is nothing unprecedented to us right now. Say, in the field of academia for the perfect example. In studies we are able to calculate the uncanny calculation in a moment that was previously impossible. We do have some technologies that can lessen our difficulties in many aspects. In ancient, how people realize the geography we are not sure. Was it really lucid things to them to capture? Absolutely not. But in today’s world one can have an inkling undersetting by just to look at the ‘Google Map’ for few minutes. People can use ‘WebMD’ to search for their disease symptoms by clicking some mouse cursers. Discovery of science makes our life much easier than before with all of these innovative approaches and give us much more understandings about our surroundings.
However, this very science of discovery falls us in deep confusion the more we learn about the new innovations the more it puzzles us. Take the astronomy for instance. Preciously people know there is an sun, a moon and some stars but now todays’ people are more interested about the ‘Dark energy’ ‘Black Whole’ all the mysterious thing we don’t know much about them. In this aspect science makes things elusive to us, even sometimes that seems to go beyond our imagination level. Previously people measure day and night with the help of the sun light, but now science discovered time. What’s time actually? is it a dimension? Or other. Can we capable enough to go future with the new conception of time machine? We surly don’t know. Some theory says we might go to future but never to past that is called ‘Grandfather Paradox’. These are so arcane things make us more confound that previous.
In sum, scientific discoveries makes us more comfortable with the surroundings ourselves on the other hand, it has some new innovation that really puzzles us that before to understand what is the world actually.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s some merits and demerits to understand .The author states that a group believes ...
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...some merits and demerits to understand .The author states that a group believes tod...
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...I tend to moderately agree with both of this prompts and I have some hypothetical an...
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...stance. Preciously people know there is an sun, a moon and some stars but now toda...
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...overed time. What's time actually? is it a dimension? Or other. Can we capabl...
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... the new conception of time machine? We surly don't know. Some theory says we might go to...
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...urselves on the other hand, it has some new innovation that really puzzles us that before to u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, really, second, so, even so, for instance, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19693654267 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16455411556 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527352297593 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 76.0701458644 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3461538462 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5769230769 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19230769231 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324261770253 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834868667665 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093003714774 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251829903739 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499064075544 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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