Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
Human race has come a long way from its initial days of evolution. During the journey, human race has seen plethora of astonishing inventions and discoveries. The given prompt states two contrasting views regarding the scientific discoveries. I mostly agree with the second belief that still a huge chunk of discoveries and findings are pending, and the world is very complex than we realize because of two major reasons exlisted below. However, I do concede that the science has made an immense progressin terms of exploration of facts and hidden truth of the world, which indicates a long way
forward.
First of all, the major reason to believe that the world is much more complex than we realize is the history of invention and exploration itself. The history of scientific findings related to world goes a long way back. And, even today, we are often amazed by different findings related to earth. For instance, during the era of Gallileo, people initially ridiculed him for mentioning the exploration about the solar system and its influence to the Earth. And, after many decades of such exploration, we find the modern day scientists still working relentlessly to explore more about the effect of gravitation pull of other celestial bodies in the wave movement or climate change within the surface of Earth. This only indicates how vast and unexplored the whole world is, and it shows no sign of ending anytime soon.
Moreover, although the scientists have successfully explored various aspects of the planet Earth in its surface and upper layer of the crust, the majority of the portions in deeper part of the Earth are still vastly undiscovered and mostly enigmatic. In many cases, scientists have been successful to estimate the composition of inner earth based on the study of occasional volcanic eruptions, and earthquakes. However, the datailed exploration still looks a matter of far distant. Also, the majority of the portions within the ocean are still vague and unexplored.
Admittedly, there have been multiple promising exploration over the course of evolution and scientific findings have given us much better understanding of the world than the human race had a few centuries ago.
To conclude, although the current knowledge of the world is substantial outcome of continuous effort of thousands and millions of scientists over many centuries, it can not be denied that the majority of the portion of the world is still unexplored. The complexity of the world can not be guessed with the amount of scientific discoveries till date and might still take infinite amount of time untill the world is fully explored.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, for instance, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10648148148 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7575653513 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530092592593 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7554993136 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250404562531 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688297335794 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775319007328 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139375134367 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762813125711 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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