Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

The prompt recommends that foundation of the education should be either based on moral values or logical. I would like to give three reasons why foundation of education should be based on moral values.

To begin, the moral values learned will be helpful while taking a important life decisions. To example, consider a girl or boy searching for their potential partners. In this world, there are good people and also bad people. Though saying good people is very subjective, there are certain facts which make a person good in the society. In general, people look for kindness, compassionate, honesty, trust and loyality in their potential partener. However, because of lack of moral values, they tend to get attracted to materialistic things like luxurious car, bunglow, jewelleries etc. These materialistic things won't stay for the long run. The person who is very rich now is not always going to stay rich. If a girl marries a boy only looking at his affluent life, ignoring his characters, she might be falling in a pit. She would have to pay for this wrong decision. Further, at some point, he might loose all this money but he is not interested or avid to work. He is lethargic that he stays at hoem at day without earnings. In this situation, the girl obviously have to strive hard to get a job or switch her job so that she can feed both of them. She will be clearly sad because of this situation. Though she has tried several times changing his listless behavior, there was no success. Thus, she should have taken a proper decision in the beginning when she married him. She was in a misconception that money would be always there and he is good and a hard-working person seeing his affluent life. Here, if she was not ignorant about the moral values, she could have taken the right decision rather than falling for money. Therefore, the foundation of education itself should be based on moral values.

Further, the moral values is very important as a human being .For illustration, during the world war II, there was melee between the Americans and Japanese. The bomb which Americans put on the Japan had compeletely obliterated the Japan. Many lost their loved ones. Japan was brutually destroyed. There was no food and shelter. The authorities didn't take a proper decision to solve a problem between two nations which lead to the great loss. Authority took the logical decision based on the facts. Both were just concerned about the winning of the war. No body thought of making peace. These moral values will come only when there is good foundation in the earlier days of schooling. Thus, the moral value education is way more important when compared to logical education.

Admittedly, some believe that logical education is more important than the moral education. There are situations where in the people get trapped because they are good. For illustration, in a company there will be many employees working a project. There will be some people with very little knowledge about they show-case as if they know everything. During the company meetings, they speak about the improvements that they want to do it on a product, but when it comes to the implementation they just delegate their work to some innocent person who will very skillful. The job will completed by this innocent person but, the recognition goes to the senior employee. If the junior person ignores this, then he is doing a big mistake as such things has to be discussed with higher authority to make a proper decision. The junior employee was thinking of moral values as it was not a good thing to complain about the senior teammates. He should have taken the decision logically as such things shouldn't be ignored and will further cause him more such problems. Although, in this situation junior has done a good job by ignoring it. The senior employee seeing it might get some realization of his problem. Also, the junior is very new to the field, so he has to learn many things some his senior, so he can take this chance.

Due to all these reasons, I agree that moral values plays a vital role in the foundation of education over the logical education

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in fact, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3432.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 716.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79329608939 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17283059074 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55564763851 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 320.0 215.323595506 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446927374302 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1049.4 704.065955056 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 45.0 20.2370786517 222% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2558455104 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2666666667 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9111111111 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239783170625 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586081731602 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842706569323 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183109457204 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837814092561 0.0667264976115 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in fact, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments