Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others
may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or
disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you
take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in
which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these
considerations shape your position.
The ones who don't have self doubt are the people who leave a lasting impression in the world and are immortalized by their ideas and thoughts which marks their legacy. Such people dont flinch from their position no matter the criticism or doubts that are being raised about their vision, such people are bound to be remembered by all. I agree with the prompt and the following points will help strengthen my position for supporting it.
People who don't flinch from their position even after severe doubt is cast upon them have a strong will and clear understanding of their position and know what they beleive in is the ultimate long term goal and have all the supporting ideas ready behind their stand. For instance, Mahatme Gandhi took a firm stand in the apartheid movment in south africa, for which a lot of poeple raised questions about his methods of non violnece and satyagrah, but he remained firm on his grounds and achieved what no one else could. In this way he immoratlized his image and ways into our modern society his shear will and belief in non violence, overshadowed all doubt and criticism from oppposition.
Leaving a legacy is more about what a person does even when faced with adversitites beyond his control. These legacies can only be created when there is no doubt in the mind of the doer and he is willing to risk all for the point he is trying to make. We can consider example of a scientist who works throughout his life to proof a point which other critics, always find a loop hole in. Even so he never stops working on his project untill it is completed, because he beleives in what he is doing and mere criticism from people who don't know what he has in mind cannot buldge him from his goal. When he finally completes this project and publishes the result he has created his leagcy no matter the result, against all odds he has stood up to show what he beleives in. Even after multiple failures he does this for the pride and legacy he is to leave in the world and his work of field.
Only a person clairvoyant about his idea, having a clear understanding of reasoning behind it can ignore all criticism and look at the final result. For instance, whenever a researcher takes up a new work, he is met with a lot of criticism as how he could fail or how others have failed in the same thing, but his determination and supporting ideas give him insights which most critics don't understand. Making him capable of solving the issue at hand with his experience and keen thinking. So, we can say experience also plays a key role is leaving a legacy in many fields. Some fields require drastic action, other require long term effort, like creating a legacy by planting numerous tree and mainting them within a lifespan.
We can conclude that leaving a lasting legacy is easier than it sounds, if the person is determined and has clear focus on the goal and does not buldge and flinch because of words from peers and public. In this way one can easily cast a lasting legacy on his friends, family and the world, no legacy is small and big all are lasting in their respective fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, then, even so, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 562.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55516014235 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37584399595 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476868327402 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2509867517 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.736842105 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5789473684 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169788672259 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654811741165 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580302624697 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118646771706 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472305425876 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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