Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is irrefutable that being confident in one’s beliefs and not doubting oneself upon minor criticism is essential for succeeding. However, being utterly tenacious and disregarding all criticisms could be more detrimental than beneficial. As far as I’m concerned, being able to analyze others’ opinions, extracting the most useful and logical of them and challenging ones’ beliefs according to them if the best way to ensure leaving a lasting legacy.
Humans are far from being omniscient and we all have certain biases which shape our beliefs and affect our doings. Being obstinate and closed to other people’s opinions might lead to continuing to believe in a false statement or concept which could potentially give rise to unfair or illogical actions. Therefore, each person should be in constant endevour to challenge his/her beliefs periodically, identify the ones that are based on prejudice, and try to reshape those beliefs. It is only by this means that one can increase his/her chance of doing what’s right.
However, being too malleable could also lead to confusion and consequently inaction. The ones who lack the ability to analyze criticism and react to the most logical ones, often tend to change their beliefs too easily. This could lead to confusion and inaction that is caused by constantly changing ideas which makes it hard to move in a certain direction. The situation could be described by the following metaphor. If a leaf which is so light that could be moved by any breeze is left in a windy room in which air blows from various doors and windows, it would start oscillating or moving in random directions at best.
Throughout the years, the most succesful people have been the ones who have implemented acceptable feedback in their actions. Leaders who hold public refrandums are an example of this matter. People’s ideas are used to balance the beliefs of the leader about how the country should be ruled, and these governments often tend to be more praised as the time goes by. Criticism, if handeled with wisdom, could make substantial contribution to success.
To conclude, changing ones opinion with every external criticism is as disadvantageous as being utterly tenacious. The most succesful people are the ones who notice the good advices adeptly and choose to reform their beliefs correspondingly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1968503937 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78280832159 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4499113799 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167906693423 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544852551582 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336686983184 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100699529573 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147915110296 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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