Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
In 2 century, a man is called developed only if he is multitalented, multifunctional , ethical. To develop fully one should not restrict to some particular domain. I disagree with the statement which does not put emphasis on taking extra Humanities courses.
In my opinion, I disagree with the given prompt as author has made an unfair generalization.
To begin, we live in a society where we should not have a subject expertise on particular subject but also overall knowledge of the system. Which means we should have amalgam of courses like if a student has major in business domain then he should be given some humanities courses which will help him to grow ethically like what are the ideal characteristic of a businessman not just in the view of business but humanity, ethics etc.
Further, the world is full of factories, industries, where we polute our surroundings and as a result of that we are jeopardizing our next generation, not just the human kind, but the whole living creatures. For example, due to chemical we discharge in sea water, plethora of dolphins and other water creatures have died and because of that water cycle has been disturbed. A businessman or a scientist should be taught humanities in their curriculum so that they can decide not only on what is lucrative for this generation or humankind but also consider points which wont put our next generation in danger.
On a macro scale, there should be a subject on humanity irrespective of what major subjects students have taken as it will help humankind to grow ethically and a businessmen or scientists can decide considering not just business point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... if he is multitalented, multifunctional , ethical. To develop fully one should no...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew of business but humanity, ethics etc. Further, the world is full of factories,...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a businessman' or simply 'businessmen'?
Suggestion: a businessman; businessmen
...ll help humankind to grow ethically and a businessmen or scientists can decide considering no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, of course, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92805755396 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95855069016 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9148834809 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173358591268 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590355931731 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681632936172 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876567025582 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651469034077 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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