Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agr

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Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.

Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.

Studying humanities in addition to major courses forces business students to spend some of their limited time to humanities which could have been utilised on studying major subjects only. It also put additional financial burden in terms of attendance at classes and stay in a college hostel, which is required to study these courses. While there are no reservations that students who are studying business or science should not study humanities since studying these extra courses would consume precious time, there are reasons to believe that study of humanities would make them better business managers or better scientists. Humanities provides them the opportunity to learn from the past, since it covers courses on how human civilisation evolved from ancient times to modern times, and enable them to produce new business solutions as per the changing needs of the contemporary time.

First reason that supports the idea of studying humanities along with business or science is to understand this world or even any issue holistically which is not restricted to any one field of study. Humanities has potential to provide business managers to understand consumer psychology by using behavioral subjects that are not covered in business and science courses. By understanding the markets and the people constituted in that market, business managers are able to devise solutions and goods, which consumers buy or consume to satisfy their desires. For instance, the launch of Coca-Cola, a beverage in India, again in 2012 was became successful since their managers were able to apply the concepts of hierarchy theory of needs, which is a concept of humanities. Therefore, humanities complements business courses.

Another reason that buttresses the narrative of supporting business or science courses with humanities is that humanities supports business managers and scientists to think creatively and do innovation to cope with contemporary problems. Every business, be it technology or beverages, needs creative ideas to produce goods and market them effectively so that idea is embraced by the public. Humanities help business managers to develop marketing campaign that touches people's minds and hearts and thus make products successful. This can be illustrated by the marketing campaign of Cadbury, a producer of chocolate, which was launched in 2002 and reshaped its product offerings. Before this campaign, there was gradual decline in sales of chocolates since people were being aware about health effects arising from sugar intake. The campaign showed chocolates as something that brings relatives, friends and even distant people close to each other by using chocolates as gift for festivals. The marketing team confirmed in 2004 in CNBC TV interview that idea was generated by referring to human psychology in terms of relations, a branch of humanities. Thus, humanities provide foundation for business courses to create innovative campaigns.

However, one such argument that contends that humanities should not be studied by students who study business or science is that it would reduce the time and costs involved in a college degree. Every bachelor degree or to some extent master degree in business requires student to study some subjects that are not directly related with the majors. Hence, these students spend extra time to complete these courses and thus incur additional costs for this extended time in college. A good example of this is an MBA degree in India that requires students to study 6 trimesters over two year period. These trimesters have eight courses, which are related to humanities. The study conducted by All India Management Association in 2016 concluded that by removing these extra courses from the syllabus would reduce the time period of MBA degree by three months and thus students would be able to join job markets three months earlier. Hence, humanities should not be included in the syllabus of those courses that are concentrated on business or science.

As can be seen from above paragraphs that although removing humanities courses from syllabus enables to reduce time and costs involved in a degree, it provides students necessary skills to be successful since humans are bound be relations and work in a society that has certain beliefs and religions. Therefore, humanities should be studied by business or science students since it can make them better managers or scientists.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... a beverage in India, again in 2012 was became successful since their managers were ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 104.0 58.6224719101 177% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3754.0 2235.4752809 168% => OK
No of words: 697.0 442.535393258 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38593974175 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13816675137 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73768981889 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441893830703 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1174.5 704.065955056 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9694045525 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.384615385 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8076923077 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25723666468 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863975831665 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575573717071 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167248657487 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304762166112 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 100.480337079 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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