To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
What is considered a most important characteristic of a society? Is it the variety of it? The purpose they serve or the evolution of the society itself? Perhaps the answer can be found in a place where there are a lot of them and so varied, it can provide detail information. A scholar can forage information so comprehensive thus give a complete view of what the society itself. I believe the major cities provides an answer to all the question.
Major cities attract a different type of people from different background, ethnic, social culture, and religion hence become a miniature of a different society. As a center of economy or government, major cities provide a wide range of job opportunity and eclectic culture attraction that makes a lot of people come. The influx of people brings their own unique personality and tradition that helps the society build. We can find every existed society in the capital city hence they provide the evidence of characteristic that the scholar needed such as conformity or tolerance. For example, Jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia, owns their own accent of national spoken language, it is not derived from other ethnic, it uniquely found in the region and prevalence to everyone who lives there more than 15 years. However, each of the people still able to speak their own traditional language and identify themselves with their origin. It serves the purpose of society, different but able to unite as one. Nevertheless, the idea may not always prove right, especially in the major country with the high crime rate. Although the building blocks the same, low law enforcement hinder the society to connect and exchange their culture to build and flourish and serve as one function.
In addition to a hodgepodge of culture, the major cities offer the evolution of people that serve the society and consequently the evolvement of society itself. It offers the birds-eye view of the basic rule of society, dynamic. What I mean is, through the urbane environment, every individual may identify oneself different through time. First, they are part of student society, over the years they change to the fashion culture people and when they reach an acme point of their life, they take part of high society. It is only possible in a major city where a social scene so byzantine and complex hence the facilitation of this process. It can’t be observed in a small county with only 2000 people where the major occupation is a farmer.
Furthermore, major cities not only offer fundamental character of society, it also provides the peripheral one. With a society that everchanging, the obscure one that happens transiently in society can be observed. For example, the process that changes our society to become a technology savvy one. When hundreds of people ready to queuing all night to get the brand new iPhone only happen in major cities where technology become essential part of life. Washington populated with politicians, economist, and consultant whose attract to the city because of the specific purpose of the city. The technocrat and computer genius centralized in silicon valley. Thus provide a different take on society characteristic. Although the idea that major cities affect society in a specific way, it may also true in a rural area. For example, the mining area. The major mining area builds a complete society that pulls people from different background and populates the area so it's quite similar to the major city society. However, complexity major city offered is unbeatable.
In the end, the character of a society can be picture wholly with a different approach. It can be found in every major city where they thrive and evolved perpetually. Although the small area can give specific and detail of close-knit society, to found the most important one, major cities are still the place to go.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for example, i mean, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3221.0 2235.4752809 144% => OK
No of words: 643.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00933125972 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03561760524 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72080147733 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440124416796 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1061.1 704.065955056 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0947914185 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0285714286 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3714285714 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05714285714 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.83258426966 435% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101229154866 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322444228229 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278456977589 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674875573648 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194139599606 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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