To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is the union of similar people; they live together, share assimilates with each other, celebrate happiness together and also share darkness and problems. To understand the important characteristics of a society we have to find an important place which reflects the real imagery of society. I am not agreeing with the statement that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Now a days the actual characteristics of society is found in small cities and villages. To justify my view lets discuss some reasons.
Firstly, the major cities are more developed than other small cities of the country. The major city is a cocktail of different culture and became difficult to understand actual culture of the society. For example, in India the major city like Delhi has so many different cultures, so it is difficult to understand most important characteristics of Delhi's society.
Secondly, the major cities were ruled by different rulers and each deviate basic characteristic of society so the major cities do not give proper information of society. For example, in India the Britain ruled for more than 100 years, due to which the influence of English man has been seen on Indian foods and clothing’s as well as on the rearing practices.
Additionally, major cities are getting developed speedily and the students became educated which affect society in different ways. The small example of influence of education on society we can saw that the small Dhabba's in India taken place by large hotels. In India the Dhabba's provide actual Indian food made up in pure Ghee; but, now people like to eat less oily foreign foods in large hotels.
Finally, to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must not only study its major cities, but also study the small villages and cities where actually the society lived in original way. Today the electronic inventions change societies very rapidly and influenced deeply to the culture of societies. In small villages the original cooking methods and social practices saved which give actual characteristics of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...give actual characteristics of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21037463977 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87605759059 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492795389049 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8966927671 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236307690367 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915858862777 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110462243139 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142513316611 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809761571847 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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