To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Study of cities is too vague and a vast task to be adopted in order to understand the key characteristics of a society. A city is constituent of both living and non-living things – starting from the people who inhibit it to the animate objects that supports life e.g. houses, streets, technology, law and order, government, and the list goes on. All of these aspects of a city which in turn builds up a vast society cannot be understood simply by conducting a simple study of a few cities. As such, a study of the major cities will not allow a researcher to know the important aspects of a society.

A researcher should primarily study the inhabitants of a country/city in order to get a taste of the main aspects of a society – for people are the main constituent of a society that moulds it for what it is. A study of the people ought to be primarily focused on the demographic details such as the age, race, religion, educational degree to understand the basic characters of the key component of the society. This would help to understand whether the society is driven by older or younger generation, or whether it is driven by white or colored people, whether they believe in a more conservative or unorthodox system and so on and so forth. For example, a society driven by young generation is likely to be workaholic, technology focused and open to innovative ideas. A demographic indicator of such as Islam as the main religion will indicate that the society is likely to follow more conservative beliefs around marriage, dating system, food specifics such as Halaal and Haraam, etc. A simple study of cities will obviously not capture these attributes that are key contributors to how a society is.

Furthermore, there should be studies conducted on the law and order of the country to understand the society in which people live in. For example, crime rate is a pivotal indicator to assess the law and order situation of a country. A country where the crime rate is significantly high, where rapes, murders and week judicial system makes up the headlines of the daily newspaper, it is likely that the society itself would promote more conservative life to protect its existence. Parents living in such a society are likely to detain their female children at home after dark or force them to don on more conservative clothes in order to protect them from an unfortunate event such kidnapping and rape etc. Societies that of Indian sub-continent in India, Bangladesh, Pakistan, are living examples of how law and order determines the society to be more conservative rather than that in developed countries like America, Canada, UK, France where a more open and secure society is prevalent that allows its women to roam the roads freely at any time of the day.

It must be, however, noted that studies of a number of cities of a country is likely to depict the rich history, culture and tradition that prevails in it, thus, determining whether the society is rich in arts and culture. A historic building such as the Colosseum in Rome is significant of the rich theatrical history that inhibits the roman society. Anyone walking on the roads of Bangladesh in any of its cities on 1st April of every year will get to be aware of the rich tradition of celebrating the Bengali New Year. Females adorned in symbolic red and white cotton sarees, men in white Punjabis (traditional outfit), streets decorated with colorful festoons, and occasional rallies will only help one to assess the richness of the traditional side of the Bangladesh society.

Study of cities is not likely to reveal the complexities of societal constituents and does not always serve as a helpful tool to understand the key aspects of a society. One must look deeply into the people and their behavioral attribute and look into a country’s state of law and order to understand society, and its key drivers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3228.0 2235.4752809 144% => OK
No of words: 671.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81073025335 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08956458786 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81059433605 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444113263785 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1054.8 704.065955056 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9012086892 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.714285714 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9523809524 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109672055565 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042575143502 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346413634128 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736612047841 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029084449373 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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