People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Emotions are an integral part of human beings – perhaps a distinctive feature among all living things given that we are unable to discern the emotions that are displayed by other living things like a cat or a dog. Each individual are endowed with a different emotional capacity – while one is overly sentimental and mawkish to be affected by even a mere glare, another person can just as be apathetic to the point of being indifferent to rebuke. Taking decisions when emotions run high is not a characteristic of a good decision maker.
Some people when emotional are so involved with their feelings that they are unable to think through and see any underlying logic to an agreement. Taking decisions during such a situation is not the best way to go forward while taking an important decision that might have great consequences. A good decision maker would take a decision after analyzing the pros and cons of a situation and take a sound decision that will be beneficial for all. For example, a person with a heart-break would not be in a position to choose his or her life partner immediately after separating from their previous partner, as he or she might be prone to being attracted to anyone who might lend them a shoulder to cry upon.
Further to the above, not all decisions are such that you may go back on them. At times, our decisions may have such great bearing on our own life that there is no scope of rectifying the situation if handled wrongly under a emotional phase. A very true and realistic example would be the situation of my sister. A very emotional person she left her job at one of the biggest advertising company in the country just because her supervisor had tried to throw her under the bus for an error she had not made but which he had made. However, she now remains unemployed for eight straight months despite trying for numerous positions and interviews. True that working under such a supervisor is difficult, but had it not been better if she had taken another job and then left the current one? She did not think through and took a rash decision under emotions and paying the price. Even if she tries, she is unable to join back there as she had left making a scene. Hence not enough logic can justify her decision taken at that time.
However, one must also analyse the other side of this argument. Some decisions are critical enough that emotions do play an important role. A person should definitely take into account the fact that whether he or she loves their partner while deciding to enter into a marriage with them. The emotion of love at that time is very important while taking this life-changing decision since he or she would have to live with him or her for their whole life. You cannot always be materialistic and apathetic while taking a decision to live with a person whom you do not love. Compromise is an integral part of a successful marriage and no one would not want to make a compromise for someone one does not love.
Therefore, taking the above considerations into account, I would opine that it is not always wise as a decision maker to take a decision under emotional situations. Emotions do not always let us think thoroughly to take a logical decision and at time there great consequences attached with our decisions that no matter how we try to justify the action, it may not be enough to go back on our actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2790.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 605.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61157024793 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56385109214 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446280991736 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 906.3 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.492738068 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2083333333 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244776220962 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839944831003 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606050271214 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155546450148 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314764212549 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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