To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
When a country is growing in terms of economy, infrastructure, politics and so on, major cities have a big role to play in it. Major cities are the only place where we can expect
to see diverse group of people from all backgrounds ranging from pharmeucutical to engineering. So, the statement makes a valid point that to understand the important characteristics
of a society, one must study its major cities. Characteristics of society may include honesty, loyalty, poverty, punctuality and so on.
Major cities have a good amount of population, infrastructure, malls and facilities like healthcare are easily accessible. These things contribute in the development of the country.
Since we can find all professionals such as doctor, engineers, investment bankers in major cities, this would aid in understanding the important characteristics of society.
The study would have diversity, profound research and we can arrive at conclusion. Major cities would cover all types of people such as high class, middle class or be it low class.
Hence, the study can cover poverty, honesty, loyalty, punctuality and so on. Major cities would be home to a lot of business as well as big tech giants. Therefore,
it covers a vast chunk of people from economic status to diversity. Major cities would also contain educational institutions from nursery to graduate schools. This would help
cover all the age groups and study would become profound.
However, it might be possible that a vast population would not live in major cities and reside in rural areas. If study is based on major cities, the research would not be able
to explain the characteristics of society. Some ajor cities might not be reflection of ideal society and hence any study made on it would be questionable. This would not only undermine
the characteristics of society but also spread false information through the studies. For instance, a city like mumbai in india is fast-paced. It is believed to be the city of dreams. It
is said that mumbai never sleeps. People are always in haste here and this could even undermine the study and develop a prejudice which might not be true.
It can be said that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, we can study it's major cities. This statement has both pros and cons but the odds
are in favour of pros.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98897931912 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.517516647 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7916666667 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332243263878 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993037779689 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163970509363 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124460793462 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131382076942 0.0667264976115 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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