An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Being ill is one of the most depressing thing altogether since, person might have to spend maximum time on bed doing nothing.This could altogether trigger quite thoughts in the patients mind, such as whether i would be able to make it?Is this doctor good enough?An Ailing Patient if given an easy access to his or her doctor's record regarding similarly afflicted patients could in fact do more harm than good to the patient.
The doctor's record could cite deaths of the patients who had suffered similar disease,this would not only demotivate the patient but also cause her to worry more.Having such kind of record could damage a doctor's reputation and the doctor's caliber would be doubted.Patients with similar afflicted ailments could have other issues as well such as a diabetes patient who died because of excess sugar but he was admitted for the treatment of malaria at the same time in the hospital.However, the record might state that the patient died while he was having his treatment of malaria through a doctor.Such a fact would undermine doctor's caliber and another patient with malaria would think twice before going to the same doctor for curing his ailment.
Also,if a patient did not follow the course of medical treatment as instructed by the doctor and died,it would just be on the record that the patient death occurred while having his treatment from the doctor.This would be the patient's fault as he did not follow the course of medicine but the record might not state this.For instance,as it happens in the case of antibiotics is that if a course is not pursued completely, the virus develops a resistance towards the same antibiotic in the future and hence it would have no effect when the same antibiotic is taken in the future.
On the other hand,if there is good record showing that the doctor almost had cured every other person for the similar afflicted disease, this would boost the confidence of the patient and cause her to trust the doctor more.A good record would speak for itself and even if the patient had a disease which is difficult to cure, he would not worry if he sees that the doctor has cured similar cases.This would lead to motivated patients who would believe that they can make it.
A doctor's record can have a positive influence on the patient if it states that doctor has cured similar cases.On the contrary, it can make patient doubt the doctor's caliber and patient might feel demotivated and give up if she sees that the record states similar cases leading to death.Such a system would be a bane to the society and would do more harm than good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78841870824 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49782619863 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440979955457 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 23.0359550562 386% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.646399128 60.3974514979 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 430.0 118.986275619 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.8 23.4991977007 382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 5.21951772744 556% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325031470716 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215103758534 0.0831039109588 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642515515305 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215103758534 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642515515305 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.0 14.1392134831 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.4 48.8420337079 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 12.1743820225 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 11.2143820225 335% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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