To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Author’s claim “To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities”, in my opinion, author has overlook the characteristics of society that small towns or rural area represents. Though, Major cities do provides the economic, political and social characteristics of society but one need to look small towns to learn cultural heritage.
In this technological world, major cities are employing advancements to be in the race of development. Thus, there is highest probability that major cities may negotiate their cultural rituals and traditions in order to become developed city. It is rural areas where people are still preserving cultural heritage and traditions.
In this technological era, people from all over country travel to major city in hope of acquiring better life. Thus, if one understands the characteristics of a society through major cities then one may construe it different from what really is as cities include people from all over world with different culture and traditions. In India, which is known for its cultural diversity, when one tries to understand the culture of any state by just looking at the major city, then he/she might fail. Cities like Mumbai, New Delhi, Bangalore, people travel from faraway places to these cities in order to find jobs, experience the advancement, etc. Thus one need to look into rural area to learn about culture and traditions of the state's people. In India, about 70 percent of people live in rural areas and small towns, thus, rural area and small towns are must to be studied in order to learn important characteristics of a society.
However, one must look at major cities, to understand the economic, political and social characteristics because it is major cities which contribute most to the economic sector. Politicians are more focused towards major cities, as major cities consists of diverse people and pleasing diverse range became a difficult task for politicians. It is in major cities, where artists is been recognized through his/her displays, performance, etc. It is nation’s major cities through which nations are categorized into developed, developing and underdeveloped category.
On wrapping up, Major cities depicts important characteristics of a society but if fails to provide holistic view, if one want a holistic view, they need to study both major cities as well as small towns or rural areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'overlooked'.
Suggestion: overlooked
...cities', in my opinion, author has overlook the characteristics of society that sma...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...in the race of development. Thus, there is highest probability that major cities may negot...
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Line 5, column 853, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...s, thus, rural area and small towns are must to be studied in order to learn important ...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...w, they need to study both major cities as well as small towns or rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, then, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32474226804 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9977716952 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479381443299 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6410930522 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.125 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365113110378 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121446683325 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112558968053 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218735971594 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105360116381 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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