To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author of the statement claims that the most important characteristics of society could be recognized by studying the major cities. I definitely disagree with this claim and there are some reasons supporting my position.
Let us consider just one country, not a whole world with its variety of cultures. We can take a big country like Russia as an axample. it is spread in geographycal terms and its population consists of many nationalities. Obviously, that they differ so far because of numerous reasons, probably, the simplest one is climate which people live in. It is not a secret to anyone that nothern people are far more depressive and sullen, because of cold and lack of light compared to cheerful and positive southern nations. Of course this rule works not only with Russia: it is easy to compare people in the USA's California and Alaska or nations of sunny Meditterian countries and gloomy Scandinavian people. And also we should keep in mind that the majority of the world population live in southern warm countries, though such important and industrial cities like New York, Washingtone, Ottawa, Moscow, London and many other European capitals are located at higher latitudes! Consequently, if one study only these major cities he or she will obtain limited view regarding people's characteristics.
But geographical location is not the one and only fact that undermines the statement above. It is important to understand the relative number of people. For instance, about ten million people live and work in Moscow and no doubt this is more than population of small town in Siberia. But what if one compare the number of people in even several Russian major cities like Kazan, Saint Petersburg, etc., to the remaining population in Russia? Yes, the majority of Russian people live in small towns and it is likely that such a situation is not only in Russia. No need to say that habits, lifestyle and values of people living in small and big cities can dramatically differ.
Summing up the above, here comes the conclusion that understanding the most important characteristics of a society damands investigation of different cities not only major ones. Numerous factors can affect the population and all of them should be taken upon consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for instance, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01871657754 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83641954156 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.7343310871 60.3974514979 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3125 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158743816368 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539489475592 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478012881398 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110092397354 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504098057471 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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