To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
With the race to develop, major cities are every nations pride. Riddled with cosmopolitan ideas, myriad of different ethnicities and the strife to better themselves, these cities sometimes lose touch with their origins. It is the smaller cities and rural areas that are palimpsest with the roots of the society give a more lucid idea of its characteristics. To truly understand the important characteristics of a society one must study not only the major cities but also the minor cities and rural areas.
Most people live in urban areas owing to availability of jobs and the living standards. But availability of jobs has also drawn many immigrants, creating an amalgam of ideas and cultures, thereby creating the society that exists today.However, understanding them would require a more thorough study than the surface picture offered by the modern cities.
While it is true that the important characteristics of a society are prevalent and can be observed even in major cities one must study its roots to truly understand them. The importance the Indian society attributes to education would only be understood if we were to go back to the ancient gurukulas, which, though extinct in modern cities, are extant in some rural areas.
Therefore, though major cities reflect the features of the present day society, studying them is not sufficient to understand characteristics of the society. To achieve a consummate understanding of the society and its characteristics, one must not neglect the importance of the minor cities and rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24096385542 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0317907203 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522088353414 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9373214283 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389468058496 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156348548287 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135105044206 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248380449349 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118795819329 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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