The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The worth of a people, their greatness, often comes from the recognition they receive from their contemporaries. Yet it is those that live after an them that see the whole picture and can be a consummate judge of an individual's greatness.
In Shakespeare's renowned literary work 'Julius Ceaser', Mark Antony said, ' The evil that men do lives after them.The good is oft interded with their bones.' Known for his ability to capture the true essence of human nature, Shakespeare rightly predicted that only those that come after the death of an individual can see the repercussions of individuals actions during their lifetime, judge evil from good, and decide that individual's worth.
The earliest contributors to science and discovery like Pythogoras, Euclid and Aristotle were looked down on during their time and yet today there is hardly a person that doesn't recognise their name or the worth of their contributions.
Adolf Hitler's meteoric rise to power was a result of the greatness his contemporeries believed he possessed. Only those that came after his downfall saw the barbarity in his actions, and the harm he had caused during his regime.
Great individuals are often ahead of their time, setting them apart from mediocrity.Their greatness is therefore often failed to be recognized by their contemporaries, and sometimes even looked down on. It is only those that live after them that can truly judge their greatness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...raries. Yet it is those that live after an them that see the whole picture and can...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'them'?
Suggestion: an; them
...raries. Yet it is those that live after an them that see the whole picture and can be a...
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...m that see the whole picture and can be a consummate judge of an individuals greatness. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ure and can be a consummate judge of an individuals greatness. In Shakespeares renowne...
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Suggestion:
...mate judge of an individuals greatness. In Shakespeares renowned literary work J...
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Suggestion:
...ry work Julius Ceaser, Mark Antony said, The evil that men do lives after them.Th...
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: doesn't
...yet today there is hardly a person that doesnt recognise their name or the worth of th...
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...me or the worth of their contributions. Adolf Hitlers meteoric rise to power was...
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...e harm he had caused during his regime. Great individuals are often ahead of the...
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Suggestion: Their
...ime, setting them apart from mediocrity.Their greatness is therefore often failed to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19396551724 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88528893551 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8690989609 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.888888889 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232113071061 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107742760857 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641506294238 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130444130513 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707289353704 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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