Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
A person's success is often associated with their competitiveness. While the drive to win plays an important role in individual success, in the government, industry or other fields where interaction and mutual understanding play a crucial role a highly competitive leader may perhaps fail to cooperate with others resulting in ultimate failure.
We live in a world where everyone cannot win every situation and therefore in order to be successful a leader must be able to cooperate with others.A cooperative leader in the government, industry or other fields will be able to maintain amicable relations and prevent unneccessary conflicts within their own groups or teams and with others.
It is only by cooperation that a leader will be able to maintain congenial relations within the team and outside thereby fostering a conducive atmosphere for growth and hence success.
Some may argue that a cooperative leader rather than a competitive one would not have the necessary drive to win and would hence be unsuccessful.Yet, if a highly competitive person were to lead in any field he or she would be unable to appreciate the views of others. Even in his own team his first objective will be to prove himself right and thus defeat the purpose of having a team and create a situation bearing close likeness to a dictatorial regime. Adolf Hitler, for example, was irrefutably a competitive leader who despite having seen success early in his career, met his bitter downfall owing to his unwillingness to cooperate.
Success in the government, industry, or other fields can be achieved by only cooperation, team effort and maintaining good relations. Therefore a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others to be successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
A persons success is often associated with their ...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
...rucial role a highly competitive leader may perhaps fail to cooperate with others resulting...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...others resulting in ultimate failure. We live in a world where everyone canno...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...r must be able to cooperate with others.A cooperative leader in the government, i...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir own groups or teams and with others. It is only by cooperation that a leader ...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...r growth and hence success. Some may argue that a cooperative leader rather than a...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Yet
... to win and would hence be unsuccessful.Yet, if a highly competitive person were to...
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Line 7, column 639, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wing to his unwillingness to cooperate. Success in the government, industry, or...
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Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...operate. Success in the government, industry, or other fields can be achieve...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... effort and maintaining good relations. Therefore a leader must be willing and able to co...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooperate with others to be successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18021201413 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04825979451 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537102473498 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6358930171 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.888888889 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45652311341 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212080720803 0.0831039109588 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165618042816 0.0758088955206 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290063055803 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144592537412 0.0667264976115 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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