To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is often described as the association of groups of people living together. So where would you expect to find the most number of people? The answer is obvious, and while there are people living outside the city; it is imperative to analyze major cities in order to identify the characteristics of a society.
Major cities are the places where civilisation as we know today was born and developed. They have always been the forefront of development and change. Throughout history the Kings and head of States were always inclined to live in major cities. This resulted in the important decisions of an entire country to be passed down from major cities. Furthermore scholars have usually lived in major cities, so here inchoate ideas were formed that eventually went on to influence generation of people that came afterwards.
While people do live outside major cities, but the proportion is small and that number is dwindling, as people are more and more are becoming attracted to major cities. Here opportunities are ripe and diverse. In the countryside or the small cities, the diversity of people with respect to the work they do, or race is minimal. It is difficult to infer the structure of a society from looking at just a single village or small city. However major cities offer a periscopic vision into the life and culture of an entire country. Here we would be able to find samples of all varying work groups and race in a single platform. We also get to observe the interactions within people of varying background in this milieu.
So while the social interactions in the countryside maybe a little different, it is evident that it is restricted. On the other hand cities provide a vast and disparate social structure within a single platform and ultimately remains the driving force that determines the characteristics of past, present and future social structure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95899053628 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75818760088 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514195583596 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2053369786 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101018850295 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316531570954 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349995752844 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060955754364 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032400623899 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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