Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Whether or not an young adult should live with their parents is a highly debatable topic. Independence from parents may seem like a highly lucrative option, and is probably a dream for many angry teens, but it is a wiser decision to live with one's family.
Living alone can seem highly lucrative, no one to stop you from carrying out your annoying activites, you can do whatever possible without receiving immidiate critisims from your parents. Childish gains aside it can also a really important lesson, by living alone an individual has to face precarious situations, which could have otherwise been handled by adults. This results in greater understanding are appreciation of life. However, the individual may not be well equiped to handle such situations, which could become deleterious. For example, if an individual has no idea of house rents in a particular location but decides to rent it anyway without consulting with adults or anyone from the neighbourhood. He could be hoodwinked into paying exessive rent, this situation could have been prevented if a more experienced adult handled the situation.
Our cost of livings are growing at a terrible pace in this modern world. So one has to factor in the financial suitability before making any decision. It is not rocket science to figure out that living with family is cheaper, as the seemingly fixed expenses gets evenly distributed. There is way to bypass this problem of course, one could just living with room mates. But even in that scenario it is usually more expensive, as parents usually bear the brunt of the living expense and of course your room mates will not be kind enough to do as such.
Young adults have a penchance to fall for detrimental activities for short time pleasure. Excessive drinking, abuse of recreational drugs can go unmonitered when an individual is not living under the guidance of an adult. This could eventual mean that the person will not be able to live life to its full potential. Many individual belive that they are mentally stong enough to avoid such a situation, however not many can actually control themselves when faced with such a situation, but knowing that you are under the watchful eyes of adults definitely impedes such activities.
Overall, living alone has a lot of perks and it definitely sounds fun. But it can be detrimental for an young adult who might not be well equiped to handle difficult situations. Or they may even fall for hedonism. So it is better for young adults to live with their families for a longer time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, however, if, may, really, so, well, as to, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9488372093 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69067254918 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532558139535 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6659272354 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27845896501 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885045459789 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102463284065 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175204368624 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727093909086 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.