Task-Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
A leader's effectivity should be judged on the basis of how morally scrupled and progressive he/she is about the cause he/she supports. Not that one should be martinet in every decision one makes but having a sound ethics is a must.
The statement comparing having moral judgement and being respected by followers is seriously lacking some points. The certainty of this statement can be assured by begging a question-why do we actually need a leader? why can't we make our own decision with everyone having same deisgnation in a group? Well, with having thousands of people fighting for a cause, it's pretty natural to have cluster of ideas coming from thousands minds. So how do we filter out which idea we should go with everyone holding same authority? There comes the necessity of having a leader. This position is further cleared by recalling some events-if Bangabandhu Sheikh Mujibur Rahman, prime minister of Bangladesh (1971) wasn't there to take a position on which side should all east pakistani should take during the 1971 liberation war, it would've not been possible to bag the victory with whole nation split between two completely different theory. And having a leader with a moderate sense of differentiating between what is right or wrong will always come at handy. Morally inspired judgements may seem unnecesarrily harsh sometimes and may not be a cup of tea for everyone, but in its ramifications it can prove to be fruitful most of the time.
Immoral judgement can sometimes lead to a transitory success but in the long run it can come out as a complete disaster tagging a price one may not able to pay. And with that said it's also important to consider one's peers point of view for which a leader is here in the first place. If he is not able to appease his followers then he won't get the due respect from them and it can lead to a complete estrangement from the lot. But at the same time it's always not possible to please everyone and still making appropriate decisions. And if someone wants to just please everyone then he/she should rather sell icecreams instead of being in leadership.
So, examining all various angles involved, a leader should always put morality forward to make right decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
A leaders effectivity should be judged on the bas...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
...stion-why do we actually need a leader? why cant we make our own decision with ever...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n-why do we actually need a leader? why cant we make our own decision with everyone ...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'clustered'.
Suggestion: clustered
...for a cause, its pretty natural to have cluster of ideas coming from thousands minds. S...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...om thousands minds. So how do we filter out which idea we should go with everyone h...
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Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...hman, prime minister of Bangladesh 1971 wasnt there to take a position on which side ...
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Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: would've
...take during the 1971 liberation war, it wouldve not been possible to bag the victory wi...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hat said its also important to consider ones peers point of view for which a leader ...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ment from the lot. But at the same time its always not possible to please everyone ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, well, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82984293194 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66127899889 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2410577031 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.529411765 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101325264946 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389686128731 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403499578545 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726917668008 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132223215385 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.