To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
While some people tend to think that if people want to understand the characteristics of the certain society, they have to study their capital or other major cities, other seem to disagree with it. In my opinion, I believe that we do need to study the major cities if we wonder the most important characteristics of its society.
To begin with, studying from its major cities can let us understand lots of culture. To be specific, if we want to understand what is the most important characteristics of a society, its major cities have far more resource. For instance, my friend, Alex, who lived in United States. He came to Taiwan to visited me last year. Since he totally did not understand the culture or characteristics of Taiwan, I suggested him to stay at Taipei, the capital of Taiwan, first. He made lots of friends, and knew lots of culture from people who lived in Taipei. He understand that Taipei has lots of financial corporates, and which is the important city in Asia. Lots of cultural events are hold in Taipei, such as parade. Thus, I think if we want to understand the characteristics of society, we have to study or stay at the major city.
The second point is that lots of important department of government of country are located in major cities. That is to say, the major city usually is the first location benefit from government. For example, Tokyo is the major city of Japan. Lots of different galleries or sports competitions held in Tokyo. Apparently, it is the special characteristics of a society that only the major cities have. Therefore, studying from the major cities is important step for understanding the society.
True, some people might say that studying the major cities cannot help us to know the most important characteristics of a society because the major cities usually have lots of culture. Nevertheless, this belief fools to consider the fact that there are lots of characteristics in one country, we cannot assert which is the most important thing. If we study from its major cities, we can realize lots of different things or culture, and we can qualify the scale to know which can represent the city. Therefore, it is not convinced to people of this idea.
To sum up, with the reasons mentioned above, studying the major cities of a country is the most important thing if we want to realize it society. There seems to be some validity to other points of view. However, I still believe that the reasons of my opinion are stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...ure from people who lived in Taipei. He understand that Taipei has lots of financial corpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78935185185 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80532253647 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412037037037 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7692021352 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2083333333 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420557896697 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126434766313 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117033422867 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270878966749 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083392357778 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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