Universities should require every student to take a variety of course outside the student’s field of study.
knowledge accumulated around the civilization is now converging. knowledge bases that have been seperate piles with distinct boundaries are now coalescing; many fields now have shared knowledge accross them, or on field borrowing knowledge from another. Thus, it have been being daunting task cumulitatively to seperate specific courses for specific fields of studies. Furtthermore, the university courses being highly specific and diving deep into the subject matter, engaging in only a similar set of courses would result in the student missing out on developing vital skills that may bolster life long learning, that some other set of courses in a different field would provide. it is with this wholistic argument that I agree with the statement that universitiesshould require every student take a variety of courses outside their field of study.
Though the university student is considered to be a matured human being, there are a myriad of things that they should learn before stepping into the world of corporations- or academia for that matter. The students may have not developed these basic skills in their primary and secondary education. In such a situation, it would be undesirable for the semi matured student to be highly specified in a field, who lacks general skills to thrive in the industry. For example, an engineering student, who have followed a stream of education heavily focusing on pure math and science, may not cover the fundamentals of management and soft skills needed to the level that the contemporary industry expect from a potential employee. In such a situation, requiring the student to follow key management courses would help the student to initiate and harness those skills. Here, "requiring" the student is important becasue the student may not know the importance due to lack of industry exposure.
Taking up variety of studies out of the field would help the modern student to improve their mental health. studies have shown how present students in universities are frustrated with their course work. some go as far as to suiciding. this is not a desirable condition. If the universities require, for example, the students in the engineering field to pursue courses in aesthetics, they would find the mere change of courses soothing, let alone appreciation of the content. it would give the students to explore the beauty of the world and the philosophical interpretations, which they might be missing out with heavy technical focus. having this type of philosophical outlook would help the students to forego their frustrations and to enjoy the life in a more vivid perspective.
Havinf said that, including a variety of courses would be advantageous to the students in a more technical perspective too. As there are more and more gray areas being created between seemingly incomaptible fields of studies, knowledge on other courses from significanlty different to one's field of study would improve the chances of success of the student in his/her proffession. Furethermore, it would allow smooth transission among career paths, should one finds out at a later point in their career a more suitable career path. there are cases where doctors, who have followed the stream of biology for most of their time, have moved into machine learning, where it involves key concepts from communication theory.
In the modern world flexibbility is a key factor. mental stability and well being have become a luxury. Variey of course modules, aside from their field of study would help students achieve this advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2995.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 570.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25438596491 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94751513837 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480701754386 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 928.8 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6866437172 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393662136113 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111297353633 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102418374753 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21791167872 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746645411703 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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