Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Many people would assert that universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying due to saving money and time. Yet, I still strongly believe that all students, regardless of their majors, should take elective courses which are not strictly related to field of pursue. I am going to delineate my reasons to bolster my belief.
Of course, focusing on a student's major is extremely crucial in order to attain profound knowledge about his or her major. Even, disregarding elective courses is going to allow students to save their time and cost dramatically. For example, let's assume that one student has to take a year off frequently because the student needs to save money while he is relatively older than other college students. In this case, he is going to feel unfairness and enormous burdensome to take extra elective courses, which he considers it is not even going to help him with his future.
Notwithstanding the fact that attending only field related courses gives benefits, we can ascertain bigger advantages of taking elective courses. Firstly, the ultimate object of universities is fostering well fited members of societies, who have not only sophisticated skills about their pursuing fields but also general knowledges about other fields. In order to achieve to educate students to become members of larger society, paradoxically, each student requires to take elective courses. For instance, one masterful electric engineer is having a brilliant skills about his major, but the person is not able to save any money because the engineer does not know how to save or invest which could be taught in universities. Learning elective courses that are not related to majors can broad own's knowledge is conducive to produce a well adapted a social member.
In addition, students can broaden their understanding toward other professions, and I argue this is highly important process to become not pedantic on only their fields. In a society, people tend to show paucity of understanding other fields. Mentioning the engineer example again, if the person did take the economic courses, he could at least have a intutive sense of economics and he could show deeper understanding of real world economics. The world interconnect with higher complexity with every fields, and only one part is not going to lead the rest of people in the world. I assure that taking elective courses are going to provide a great opportunity to understand and broaden the insight of the world.
To sum up, even though taking other courses can be great burdensome in terms of time and tuition, elective courses are going to allow students to experience other professions and become a protean member of society. In order to encourage students to take many elective courses, universities are asked to find alternative options to reduce burdensome to students such as more scholarships or various time selection with class so that students can take elective courses any time. Along a better improvement of universities systems', it is going to liberate students to take elective courses- which is necessary - with more genorisity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, still, well, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2663.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18093385214 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78830218744 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490272373541 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 853.2 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0573898613 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.15 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338758883469 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109094737755 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141427721874 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213285846487 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151343641429 0.0667264976115 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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