The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that
it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
The author states that the video camera provides a more accurate and convincing record of contemporary life than the written document. However, I agree with the author statement and video is one of the essential parts of today's modern world where everything depends on technology.
Firstly, video camera is one form of documentation which captures every events, images, characters, expressions of our life. Moreover, it can say that it helps to recollect our memories which can easily preview in future and can also be erased. For instances, by using a camera anyone can record the video of a birthday party, marriage ceremony or anniversary program. If this video will be previewed after 10 years later or 15 years later people will delightful by watching them so lively and can enjoy their every detail and expression. Moreover, the written record is so cumbersome by size and weight and whereas the video can store only in a small cheap.
Again, it is not the only record of an event but also help us in some security details by accurately record every detail of an event which helps to solve any problem. For example, we know about CC camera which is one kind of video recorder and is
installed in almost every important building. If something irrelevant incident is occurred by using the record anyone can find the criminal or suspected miscreant.
However, the author is somehow overstating the statement because video camera has some disadvantage too. It is more expensive and is not avilable in every part of the world. Moreover, some experimental objects which need more written document than the video recording. For example, we know about the great scientist Albert Einstein, Newton and other philosopher who used to work in a written document and discover many mysterious inventions. Moreover, for mathematical expression, scientific complex solution, the formation of laws written document is more useful than the video.
To conclude, every issue has pros and cons, we must be careful regarding such a thing. No matter how much better form anyone try to introduce everything there always remain something behind. However, the video provides more accurate convincing record then the written document in compare to today's world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16393442623 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68858567615 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1889252145 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369386673971 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126112230826 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139915505256 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190514988466 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917445703423 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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