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The way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself

Message is the combination of words that you want to deliver to your audience, and to make it impactful you have to ensure that not just the content is to the point but also the way it is delivered is on point. Therefore, I agree with statement.

So, when we say that the way the message is delivered covers the tone of the speaker, the intention of the speaker. I think the tone matters the most. For example - the potential Presidential candidates of the United States when are in the debate before the elections, they state their agenda, the plans for the next four years such as what they will bring on the table, how they are fit to be the president, how they can improve the people's welfare irrespective of their caste, creed, race, religion, how they are going to counter the terrorism, what new policies they are going to add to the existing one or how to revise the existing policies for the betterment. I think everybody will agree that almost all the presidental candidates would speak moreless the same thing as stated above, but what matters is the way they speak, where to high on pitch, where to pause, where to evoke audience for their reactionsor instead positive reactions. After the elections- who wins the show, of course the one who has the great ability not just to bring the changes to the country (for the better) but most importantly the way their abilities to bring the change were delivered during the debate. I think one can clearly say that the way the message is delivered will always be above the content of the message is.

Furthermore, if we consider the very current example of Russia-Ukraine war, everybody knows that Russia is one of the superpower countries and while Ukraine is clearly not but the way Ukraine President (Zelensky) has tied its nation throughout the war period with his assertion that they will not leave or concede to Russia no matter what - it shows how the Ukrainian President has done a great job just by delivering the message to his countrymen in the right tone. In the beginning of the war, everybody assumed that the Ukrainian President who was a comedian before becoming the president would back down or would take asylum in the United States, on the other hand Russia's President - Putin, with so much military and political experience would win over Ukraine easily, but now everybody knows how well the Ukrainians has been following their president words. Almost on a daily basis, Zelensky interacts with his nation through media and fills them with great passion for their country protection from the invaders (Russia).

This proves whatever the situation is, even with the bromide statements but with effective delivery of the said statement would fill a person or even an entire nation with great enthusiam.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, of course, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79331941545 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50437883763 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492693110647 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.389949028 60.3974514979 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.333333333 118.986275619 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.9166666667 23.4991977007 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.21951772744 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145611858722 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723988656244 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954750683159 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903995228316 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699411770354 0.0667264976115 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, of course, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this: