As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
The nature of the things that exist in the universe is complex and human mind thrive to make them simpler with their intelligence. They keep digging deeper till they are complacent with their findings and this mysterious nature of the universal things embark the doors to help the society in many ways. While there are countless reasons which give adherence to my perspective, I'll list the most conspicuous ones to rear my standpoint.
Since 1995, the food scientists warned us for the higher fat intake in our everyday diet. According to the then research, the fat content should be under 40 grams per day for the individual to live a healthier life and staying away from the heart problems that are the direct results of imprudent fat intake. This Paradigm shift made the food industries to baked their products such as burger, potatoes fries, chips, etc. instead of frying. However, they started adding more sucrose (refined sugar) to improve the taste of their products which is equally harmful to our health under the research conducted in 2008. Also, the existence of a ketogenic diet lately is the example of the progress in food science that fat is not the enemy for our body as compared to the sugar. The nutritionist digs deeper and broadens their perspective about the unhealthy diet came to the conclusion that fat intake is harmful in excess only but added sugar is detrimental to health and contributes to many lifelong maladies.
The existence of Artificial intelligence was long-term research that coined with the motive to make our lives simpler. The redundant task can be handled by the machine while the probabilistic task is what human should concentrate. In today's world, AI contributes significantly to our lifestyle. For instance, the AI assistance like Siri, Alexa and Google Duplex can simplify the repetitive task and help us to make our day productive. This research and development in the IT sector cannot be done if the Data scientist had not dug deeper into the understanding of their concepts and making it simpler for the public. Thus, acquiring knowledge to the extent that it becomes incomprehensible and complicated benefit the society with as it opens the door to more advancement in technology.
The discovery of the American continent exemplify that had Christopher Columbus not traveled around the world to prove the existence for the round shape of the earth, the America continent would not be discovered. The scientist has evolved far belong that point and started exploring the universe which was a bogus concept in the 18th century. This advancement in broadening our perspective could only be possible after the human stop minding the pain to go forward belong to the complexities of their finding to invent to the new concept.
In conclusion, the aforementioned facts give a clear vision that it is the nature of the things to get more complicated and mysterious before coming to the point that benefits the generations to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...which give adherence to my perspective, Ill list the most conspicuous ones to rear ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'lists'.
Suggestion: lists
...h give adherence to my perspective, Ill list the most conspicuous ones to rear my st...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h the motive to make our lives simpler. The redundant task can be handled by the ma...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ctive. This research and development in the IT sector cannot be done if the Data scien...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that benefits the generations to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03434343434 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77470463613 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9957309601 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897593402112 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026641445061 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520830286906 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571430443007 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394580982586 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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