As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.

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As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.

Massively speculating about knowledge has become ubiquitous pastime of many, since this topic remains controversial and sparks heated debates. Indeed, that knowledge do not more comprehensible seems like a sound and reasonable choice. However, the opponents still challenge that position, stating that knowledge become more complex and mysterious, even though those choices seem dubious at best. To my mind being aware of all complicity of knowledge is undoubtedly crucial and the right thing to do. Still, this area deserves further speculation and scrutiny, which I will delve into.

To start with, if knowledge had become more simple and comprehensible the time and area for study of different areas would have been more shortly. To draw a typical illustration one could examine the current situation with study of math. The students should study just only arithmetic and geometry instead of theory of graphs and math analysis. Consequently, if only

Moreover, is it acquiring more new fields of study in every areas. Generally, we have not only psychologist in general, but organizational psychologist, school, family or neuropsychologist.

As a result, the same situation between medical and engineering profession. Consequently, if we would have just only general doctor, general engineer, general designer, we would be say about comprehensive now time knowledge.

Conversely, the proponents stand their ground, stating that science more understandable now and student could study computer science in school instead of universities, how it was about thirty years ago. However, the universities program of study computer science has become more complex since there.

Nonetheless, this issue remains controversial and multifaceted, and being aware of its complexity might not only help an individual understand his or her position, but also complex and mysterious of knowledge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or neuropsychologist. As a result, the same situation between medical and engin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, in general, as a result, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73851590106 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14197666775 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5361841103 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310414088839 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933341602619 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853537684967 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135793275656 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528631316242 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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