We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As we are speaking animals, we share our thoughts by socializing and talking with our counterparts. Most of time we prefer to talk to people we get along with and since we share on the whole the same opinions, we are more incline to listen to people with our same conception. Hence the claim, which states that we would rather learn more when we connect with people we agree with instead of confronting opposing views. I only partially agree with this claim.
First, talking with people we do not agree with enables us to better assess our posistion soundness and strengthen our arguments. Indeed, detractors will always point out vents in our opinions. For instance, in quantum physics history, many physicists argues whether they should consider light as a wave or a particle. Both sides provided experiments and hypothesis, and thanks to their confrontation, they concluded eventually that light was both wave and particle. Without facing the other side, the resulting theory would have been flawed.
Although sharing the same views is conforting, it is harshly likely that progress is made. Since there will be no debate, innovations cannot emerged. Druring the Middle Ages in Europe, the Church curbed scientific progress, because these research would contradict the misconceptions the society believed in. Hence, when people tend to protect their views by disdaining others, they prevent themselves from another source of knowledge and debate.
In conclusion, conversing with people you agree with is reassuring by little can be learned since confrontation enables to build stronger views.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30196078431 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71483599629 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4089427362 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321018253404 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945856049685 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884006373563 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168338052318 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837504906712 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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