Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
As influence of the biggest companies on societies has been growing since the middle of the 1950s, the claim questions the responsibilities of such entities: should they only seek for profit or also care of societal and environmental issues ? If the former option is the primary objective of all new companies, enteprises should take into account unavoidable their impact on population and nature and become aware of their duties.
First, companies are often created to answer a need, then making profit by selling product or service that fullfil it. Hence, earning money is the principal objective of most entrepreneurs and it is the driving force which leads the transformations of the processes of the company. For instance, Henry Ford conceived the chain labor to optimize the supply chain and the production process, to produce and sell more cars, enventually to get better earnings at the end of the year.
However, such deep and extensive changes have substantial consequences on societies and environment. Should I mention the uproar about the alienation of the workers, as a result of Fordism and Taylorism? Or the pollution of soil and waters, not to mention the diseases of the employees, provoked by toxic poisonous compounds in sweat shops and factories in developing countries ? Due to these concerns, responsibility of the big companies is a burning issue of our century.
Lately, most of them are aware of this challenge and have implemented better work conditions, creating incentives for the employees. For instance, start-ups such as Google or Facebook in their first years, promote inclusiveness of the recruitment and beneficial work environment, ideas largely adopted by many companies nowadays to attract the millenials. Concerning environmental responsibility, corporations have been engaging a renewal of their headquarter to be more sustainable and less energy-demanding, satisfying both profit-making and reasserting their public image.
Nonetheless, these decisions are not groundbreaking enough to change in depth their huge impact they have on our planet. The subprimes crisis proved that mistakes of the few are paid by the many: thousands of family lost their homes due to this crisis, hundred of countries were also deeply affected. Similarly, stronger eco-friendly policies should be implemented or passed to curb the unlimited and careless growth of certain irresponsible companies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ly lost their homes due to this crisis, hundred of countries were also deeply affected....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, similarly, so, then, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50938337802 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19177164318 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608579088472 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4893775203 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113716312081 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345427919628 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363294020508 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573686929918 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201755128827 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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