The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
“Democracy : To the people,For the people,By the people” is a type of leadership style adopted by most of the nations now a days. I do support the statement that the people living in a society must raise their voice and question the authority whenever it is needed ,but the interference of the people in each and every aspect of authority is not suggested as this might have an adverse effect on their nation.
When people restrain themselves from questioning the authority and adopt taciturnity when it comes to the malfeascent activites done by the leaders of the nation then leadership style of that nation is likely to become autocratic in nature which eventually could be deadly for the people for living there. The best example that fits this context is the autocratic style adopted by Hitler in Germany. Even though some people could already sense that his intentions might not be good for the nation during his early stages of politics yet they didn’t oppose him which eventually led him to be the dictator of the nation.At that point of time the people lost the power of opposing him thereby suffering for the rest of their lives.
It is very important for the people to be united first before questioning the authority of their own nation.Internal dissensions if any should be resolved and later they must strive for their rights deprived by the authority if any. The best example that can be considered in this context is Same-Sex marriages was considered illegal in USA but the way people who oppose this view have come together and strived for making the marriages legal is laudable.Such kind of unity is very important to question the authority.People getting on the same page will help them to figure out between the good and bad laws or activities implemented by the government to start supporting or opposing them.
However there is a chance that if people couldn’t understand the actions implemented by the authority which indeed are for the well-being of the society if opposed by the people might actually put the nation’s development at jeopardy. The people before questioning the actions or the activities implemented by the authority should carefully analyze them and then have an opinion about it.
Therefore, The well-being of a society or a nation rests with the people of that society. Raising their voice whenever the leadership style seems dictatorial or whenever the leader they’ve elected tends to misuse his power will make the leader know that his actions are being carefully watched by the vigilant people which leads the leader to make better decisions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03218390805 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82923419214 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.660270125 60.3974514979 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.0 118.986275619 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5454545455 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183804479925 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860294728038 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505911901322 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115417801123 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274302008175 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.