The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People are what make up a society and shape its destiny, they can be called the foundation to the society. As people shape their society they shall also have the right to question the governing authority. This ensures a transparent and smooth way of functioning of the society, where the authority is accountable to the people. So it is necessary that people question the authority in charge of their welfare.
People questioning the authority ensures two things: firstly, it makes the system more accountable for the action it takes, which in turn keeps the authorities power in check. As, taking rash steps may lead to a political unrest in the society. For example, If the authority plans to invest in building a shopping complex in time of a financial setback, people will raise voice over this. Leading the authority to think twice before they carry on with their project. Secondly, when people question the authority it makes them feel connected to the government this creates trust between the authority and the society, which in the long run ensures development of the society and well being of its people.
The input of people in decision making process for their society is fulfilled when they are allowed to question the ruling entity. Questioning the authority promotes critical thinking in the people as they judge what is right and wrong for them. This helps in developing a sharp and smart society who knows more about their welfare. It gives a sense of belonging to the people, as their input i heard and taken into account. When this is not done people may be uninterested in what the ruling power does and with no guidance from it's people the power may wreck havoc in the society, and disturb the natural balance.
So it's very important for the people to question authority as it let's them take part in governing themselves, while making the ruling party more transparent and accountable. While maintaning a power balance in the society. Though all decisions cannot be opinionated upon by the general crowd, like defense tactics or confidential information of the country, but the opinion of general public on everyday matters is a must. As, it promotes free speech and gives a sense of freedom.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...belonging to the people, as their input i heard and taken into account. When this...
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... guidance from its people the power may wreck havoc in the society, and disturb the natural...
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...party more transparent and accountable. While maintaning a power balance in the socie...
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...tion of the country, but the opinion of general public on everyday matters is a must. As, it p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91223404255 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59070266987 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497340425532 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1687965486 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.611111111 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221008216917 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728089829281 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577647719088 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145110644967 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526325472163 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.