To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Ethics and moral standards define a person, a person devoid of such values find it difficult to be accepted into the society and it criticized by his colleagues and even the public. One who maintains high morals and ethics is respected by almost everyone in the modern society where venality is a common characteristic of people in power and position. These qualities don't just earn respect in society but also give peace of mind to the one practicing and possessing them. It can be said that these are the fundamental qualities and modern leader should have.
One is power should i.e. the leader should care about everyone in the society irrespective of their financial and social positions, he should not be compelled by avarice. He should maintain his ethics and moral standards and steer clear of bribery and other ill practices, one who does this can become a true venerated leader. This will help him to be approachable by everyone in the society and enable balance of power between everyone. Leaders with such qualities can really change the society, they can inculcate people with these qualities which they practice.
Leader have to bear great pressure while in office or anywhere they go, one way to relive this pressure is to be transparent, what is a better way to be transparent than to practice ones ethics and morality. This gives the leader peace of mind as he is not scared of whether he will be caught any second for a bribe, extortion or any other sin which may be committed during his time in office, if he has poor ethics. Maintaining high ethical standards hence is not only key for societal development but also for the development of the leader as a person.
One who doesn't preach high morals and ethics can also be caught in troubles and problems, he may be questioned by the media about his actions, or may be caught red handed in a sting carried out by a welfare group. This can reduce the trust of people in the leader and the leading party and can cause a political unrest in the area. He can be disregarded by his own peers in a an discussion due to his actions which may have even tarnished their reputation.
Ethics and morals can build or break a nation, one who understands this is a great follower, but one who preaches these high morals and ethics can be a great leaders. One can give examples of leaders like Nelson Mandela to proof this point. Who carried on the apartheid movement in South Africa against the immoral racial mindset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53476061775 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5402719841 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.411764706 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7058823529 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158063974657 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585475993135 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356888313597 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100286541585 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251541037294 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.