When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings
The issue statement says that the modern development should be given more preference over the preservation of historic buildings. I completely disagree to this view point due to the following reasons : firslty, Historic buildings are the true representative of the nation's antiquity, they are the symbol of country's rich diversity and the perfect model of the architecture and lastly they are the living proof of the country's past Tyrannical leaders and kingships. In addition to it there are other advantages of preserving the historical buildings such as tourism and on the name of developement these buildings shouldn't be exploited.
Firstly, the historic buildings are the representative of the country's antiquity. As we all know tht every nation in the world has different type of historical background and every countrymen want to know about the historical background of the country in which they are living. Even people itinerate from place to place just because they are curious to know about the history of the country and the only source is Historical buildings. For instance, Egypt is famous for their pyramids, Taj mahal in India is famous for it's architectural design, Rajasthan is famous for the magnanimous forts etc. In addition to it the edifice buildings like Statue of liberty, Golden temple India, they are also the source of rich income and tourism for a country. A great rise in GDP can occur due to the high tourism. So, the historical buildings should be preserved.
Secondly, historical buildings are the direct symbols of the country's rich diversity. For instance, some buildings have cravings carved on the walls, from where we can know all about the country's previous rich diversity. Even painting also represent the diversity a country had. These buildings can also act as as model of the architectural design for modern day architectures. For example, Taj mahal was made by Mughals many years ago and it's walls were structured and inter-locked in such a way that it can even survive highest amount of danger and natural calamity. So, engineers and architectures can learn from them and can ersatz the design. So, the historical buildings should be preserved.For instance, there are still kilometers of tunnels in some forts going from one country another even when there was no technology at that time which is quite scintillating.
Lastly, these buildings are living proof of their country old kings, their way of living etc. and in this way history can be learnt easily by the kids. it is very important that every man should know about their history only then he/she can be a responsible citizen. How they conquer the other nations are all represented by the buildings.
Hence, the reasons and examples mentioned proved that on the name of developement these Historical buildings should not be damaged. Infact these should be preserved and can be made into tourist spots to lure the tourists and to gain income
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08884297521 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81752407573 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45867768595 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2428935646 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.086956522 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0434782609 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287442537833 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973426301899 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927330005482 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182378443865 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679506527462 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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