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The table delineates the information of weekly rental charges and yearly wages in the three areas of London city. Here, the table demonstrate three areas namely Notting Hill, Regent's Park and Fulham also the rents of the property and salaries are describes based on the one, two or three bad in corresponding particular area.

Furthermore, based on the information Notting Hill area is very costly as compare to other areas in London city. Also the rent of 3 beds in Notting Hill is significantly higher than any other parts of London city. In other hand Fulham area is a cheap as compare to any other areas. Here, the weekly rent of the 1 bed is only 215 pounds. That is the one of the most lower cost describe in table, also the 3 bed weekly rent is also significantly higher in Fulham area as compare to one bed and two bed weekly rents.

To illustrate further, the salaries needed for living in Notting Hill is also higher than any other area in London city based on statistical data describe in table for 1 bed salary required 98,500 pound/year same as for 3 beds 194,000 pounds/year. On other hand, In Fulham city salaries are comparatively low for one, two and three bed. In Fulham for 1 bed salary required 56,500 pounds/year same as for 3 beds salary required 157,500 pound/year.

As a whole scenario describes that the weekly rents of beds are increased based on a number of bed increase same as salaries needed also increases when the number of beds increase. In addition Notting Hill is the costly area whereas Fulham is a cheap area in London city.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... compare to other areas in London city. Also the rent of 3 beds in Notting Hill is s...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
...only 215 pounds. That is the one of the most lower cost describe in table, also the 3 bed ...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re to one bed and two bed weekly rents. To illustrate further, the salaries need...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... salary required 157,500 pound/year. As a whole scenario describes that the wee...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...es when the number of beds increase. In addition Notting Hill is the costly area whereas...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Fulham is a cheap area in London city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, whereas, as for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65827338129 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54192372481 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.384892086331 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6735906248 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0322834941754 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0152649183794 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224317139751 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0265096449694 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00795104970394 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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