Mrs Barrett an English speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barrett In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would lik

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Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day
next summer.

Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter

• suggest how you could help her in her home
• say why you would like to do this work
• explain when you will and will not be available

Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Mrs Darrett,

Dear Mrs Barrett,

I'm responding to the ad you published calling for help with some chores at home.

As a young kid and teen, I wad head over heels occupied with studying and the many other activities I did for self-growth. This meant my stay-at-home mother had to put up with a huge amount of work on her own. Growing up to be more responsible, I've always wanted to make amends, and I see this ad as a great opportunity to get used to giving a hand at home. I've also been engaged for some years now and I'm set to get married this year. This will definitely give me a glimpse of how it's going to feel from the inside.

As you might have guessed by now, I'm not really an expert in most chores, but I sure can help with laundry, dusting, and sweeping. Also, having lived by myself for 3 years, I mastered doing the dishes. I'd be happy to help with any of those, and I'll also be open for others.

To help you arrange this, I'd like to also let you know the exact times I can chime in at. Basically, any time during the morning would be fine by me. Feel free to contact me with what you prefer, and I'll manage to come. I can probably stay for only some hours in the afternoon as well, since I will be joining a reunion with college friends later that day.

Looking forward to your response.

Regards,
Assem Ashraf

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mrs Barrett, Im responding to the ad you published call...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...own. Growing up to be more responsible, Ive always wanted to make amends, and I see...
^^^
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...y to get used to giving a hand at home. Ive also been engaged for some years now an...
^^^
Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lso been engaged for some years now and Im set to get married this year. This will...
^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ill definitely give me a glimpse of how its going to feel from the inside. As yo...
^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e. As you might have guessed by now, Im not really an expert in most chores, bu...
^^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...r 3 years, I mastered doing the dishes. Id be happy to help with any of those, and...
^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... years, I mastered doing the dishes. Id be happy to help with any of those, and Il...
^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...be happy to help with any of those, and Ill also be open for others. To help you...
^^^
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...or others. To help you arrange this, Id like to also let you know the exact tim...
^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Basically, any time during the morning would be fine by me. Feel free to contac...
^^
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...to contact me with what you prefer, and Ill manage to come. I can probably stay for...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23228346457 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23140840241 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7892703766 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201251895704 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612194815297 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513180887064 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104341113246 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299983576588 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mrs Barrett, Im responding to the ad you published call...
^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...own. Growing up to be more responsible, Ive always wanted to make amends, and I see...
^^^
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...y to get used to giving a hand at home. Ive also been engaged for some years now an...
^^^
Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lso been engaged for some years now and Im set to get married this year. This will...
^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ill definitely give me a glimpse of how its going to feel from the inside. As yo...
^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e. As you might have guessed by now, Im not really an expert in most chores, bu...
^^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...r 3 years, I mastered doing the dishes. Id be happy to help with any of those, and...
^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... years, I mastered doing the dishes. Id be happy to help with any of those, and Il...
^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...be happy to help with any of those, and Ill also be open for others. To help you...
^^^
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...or others. To help you arrange this, Id like to also let you know the exact tim...
^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Basically, any time during the morning would be fine by me. Feel free to contac...
^^
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...to contact me with what you prefer, and Ill manage to come. I can probably stay for...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23228346457 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23140840241 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7892703766 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201251895704 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612194815297 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513180887064 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104341113246 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299983576588 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.